Please update.
This fic is so wonderful.
I want more, please.
Will the effects of the program start to affect Zim?
Is the weird shadow thing he did part of the program he downloaded?

i like where this is going continue

oh my GOAWD! OHHHH MAAAAIIIIII GGGGAAAAAAWWWWDDDDD HOW DID YOU WRITE THISIISIS? its like something right out of my DREAMS! its so INTENSE AND AWESOME! and ZIM is so cOOLLLOCOCOCOCOCOOOCOOOLL! I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH! auh! you make me want to CRY becasue this is so fantasticly awesome, Zim was all like,

"Oh by the way, im 200."

And that was the last line? WHAT? that was EPIC! and I have no clue how you figured out any of that math nonsence in the begining, But I'll take youre word for it! cuz its AWESOME! I WISH I HAD A BETTER ADJECTIVE for the awesomeness of youre story but I dont!

sooo how about you just update soon now?

You have to make a chapter three! THIS IS AWSOME! I really like it. It's really in-character. I love INVADER ZIM and .

Wow... what an incredibly surprising turn of events, heh heh... Zim is being sorta soft... for a second at least and the next he is murderous.

Come to think about it... it's not surprising in the least.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Ooh, fascinating. Nice spot to end the chapter. D

"He paused a moment to scratch the itchy skin beneath his wig, then returned to playing with the slop."

That amuses me because I'm picturing Zim casually sticking his hand under his wig and NO ONE noticing. XD

This is an awesome story, very in character, well written and you did the 'Zim finds an injured human' thing without making me want to puke. Can't wait for more!

AHAH! XD Awe poor stupid Zim.

please go on.

-snrk- Oh, Zim. So destructive. So clueless. So very delusional.

You're doing a great job of keeping everyone in-character! I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha! You can ALWAYS count on Zim's stupidity to be way WAY amussing, SPECIALLY when he unintentionally pisses off The Tallest!

I bet that once the QEPI activates all hell will break lose!

Zim style! LOL.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

They danced throgh a field of joy... Good plot! Please write more!

Oh... VERY promising first chapter, I can't wait for more. So far the characterizations are PERFECT and the prose is quite flowy and descriptive without being purple. Good work, soldier.

Well if history has taught us anything is that The Tallest's atempts to kill Zim end up badly.

And knowing Zim's luck it is for certain that he will somehow survive his leaders new QEPI weapon with horrible results.

YAY!

This loos like a promising fic, I'll keep reading if ya keep updating.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

This seems, fun and interesting. And in character! You're a really good writer, keep it up!