Reviews for Streetfight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Behold! the power of the nod! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was really cleaver... It was good and made me think. Not so good at this time of night... Or is it morning... :) Aly |
![]() ![]() ![]() a nice little fic, I always enjoy a hero!Alex (I should admit, when the woman tripped, I may have snorted in laughter at her ineptitude *feels vaguely shamed*) thanks for the good read : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! Don't you love Alex? |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Awesome! I recently got back into the Alex Rider jive after seeing the Stormbreaker movie (part of it,) for the first time. Anyways, great first AR fanfiction for me to read! You're obviously quite talented - love the ending, twas my favorite part! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. (Nodding head and drawing out the I to sound like a gangster.) yep, you have gangster sounding approval. |
![]() ![]() this is an epic FAIL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really like this story. It's very well written and thought out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The end I don't understand. Why did James wait for Alex to nod at him? Is he the new leader, or was he making a point of Alex being his equal to his friends and himself? If you could answer it would be much appreciated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story _ |
![]() ![]() The story was original I'll say that but the ending was a bit odd and slightly confusing, correct it and it will be good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was AWESOME! I loved it so much :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. James needed the nod first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story! I like the discriptions and the way you write his thoughts. The ending was a bit weird though. It wasn't very realistic i find. Why did The bully just stop? it was weird. But the story was still well writen. The ending kinda threw me off. |