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Omg this story is ridiculous BAHAHAHHAHAHA

Either time is really flying or your missing some chapters. She's been there for two days. How could there be a trial and prison transfer for Kyle so quickly? This would take months probably over a year. This story has a great story line but so much is missing to pull it all together. It's so predictable.

Thank you for taking the time to write this.

Um rose was outnumbered by a lot. So why don't they just rip her apart and set her aside. Than rip kyles head off and put it in the fire. I can't understand why rose would help a rapist clearly she doesn't know but still. But I'm completely confused why no one stopped rose. I mean she's one person and not a challenge for any of them really.

Great story, what the hell is wrong with Rosalie wow

I this chapter too

Good story

I like the story but is very cliché at times

it is 2017 as I am writing this I do hope you write more this is good! :~)

okkkkk...weird first the post office table now phsych communication i mean how cheesy could it get dreaming about z same things god why dont u shoot me now its such a crrrrrrrap

Bella is very OOC.

She was written like a middle aged old soul who had never had a relationship because she could not relate or was attracted to other guys until Edward in the novels.

Here she is crass and very much an immature teenager who thinks she is a grown up. She thinks she is destroyed by the betrayal of her friend and ex.

While the premises is interesting, I am going to stop reading this. You see what you have failed to take into calculation is Edward would have further matured emotionally and mentally by 2008 than how he was in 1918.

With immature Bella being in a prior relationship and Edward becoming wiser they don't have much in common except the correspondence. Which is ancient history to Edward. They don't have the equal ground of having no prior relationship which made their's special, being mature and never been attracted to anyone before. Sure Bella is jaded but what teenager is not full of angst.

Your writing is not bad but you have not captured the characters well.

I doubt this review matters as this story is so old but I thought I would share my opinion.

loved this chapter

wow! I am really enjoying this story!

amazing story...you have wonderful imagination power

Very interesting. How would it feel to correspond with someone from the distant past?