I kind of like it. It's interesting. Usually Mitchie's so innocent and never lies (other than the obvious). Awesome oneshot!

Kelly

This is really good! It applies to so many situations besides the specific one you're writing about. You're a very talented writer. ( :

I like it XD it puts a different perspective on Mitchie XD its cool a little tragic but it sounds better that way XD

~KT~

O.M.G.

This was s l. It had such a tragic undertone (does that make it sense? It makes sense in my head but we all know that doesn't mean much!) I love it. It's poetic and simple an t. Each word packs a punch.

I don't have enough words to describe th of this!

And THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO much for dedicating it to me AND telling others to read my story! You're such a Sweetheart!

Very interesting. Not very often you find a Mitchie angst where she's not the protagonist or all perfect like. I like it. It's different, but a good different )

wow really short but i do like it a lot.

it's simple but gets the point across.

it's also very refreshing because normally fanfics play mitchie up as this innocent and perfect person but this shows that she's NOT and it's very realistic, although also very angsty.

but like i said, it works.

nicely done!

:D

Wow. Short and sweet. I like it. :3 Nice use of repetition, and, as always, it leaves me wanting to know more. XD

Oh wow.

That was...powerful.

I never knew you could write angst so well.

This nearly brought a tear to my eye. As you know, I'm quite an emotional person, lol.

Most stories written in this format are Tess-centric, but I loved reading about Mitchie in this way. It shows her vulnerability.

I loved this, Vale!

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I don't know about this one. It was good, but the ending line just didn't seem as powerful as it should've been. It wasn't a huge eye-opener.

Overall this was pretty good, not as great as your other fics, but good nonetheless.