Hehe! This is just as awesome as Silver! I'm gonna keep reading now...onto chappie number two!

DUDE updatee

The beginning of the dream sequence was kind of hard to understand.

I think you could use some more imagery so the story is easier for the reader to picture in their head.

I get kind of nervous whenever an author has Fang shirtless, but I'm glad that Max didn't start staring at his abs or something goofy like that.

Anyway, this is good. I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, but I've been busy also.

-Skye

:)

i liked it, please right more!

Update super soon. I love it so far.

i love this story. please keep writing!

I loved it again of course. I can so see this happening. Its so perfect.

now after those last couple sentences you need to post the next chapter soon, thet were such cliffys!

OH MY GOD!

update exeptionally soon, and

focus on the kissing the crap out of her

cause i really liked that bit

omg i luved it! its not stupid its great! i even like it better than silver (but i reaally liked silver too) so pleez keep writing! update soon! :D

school does suck

amazin story btw :)

to hell with homework! finish the awesome story! heh heh J

This is awesome. Great Fax, very original, I hope you'll be updating pretty soon. Iggy is freakin' hilarious!

-Brittany

Yay dude bonding! Iggy and Fang rock, as long as they're not being homo. (Figgy? Are you people kidding me?)

Anyway, my suggestions for the next part are-

1. Ice cream and excruciatingly painful BRAIN FREEZE! Preferably for Iggy, that scheming fiend.

2. And then, of course, seeing whether or not Fangy kisses the crap out of her, as long as you keep it semi-realistic. XD

-Skye

cool story! its off the hook! LOL