Que clase de ikarishipping fue este , una violación es algo muy duro. Pero es cierto nadie se quedaría sin ignorar

Wth is this?! Paul is little OOc? He is so OOc from beginning! But... this is fun. I cant stip grinnjng like scary and do 'Kyaaa!' Thing. Good job!

:0 I have no words to describe what I feel, but ... wow , it was all so dramatic and sad, desperate and bitter , just ... wow .

dawn is perfect in everyway and I also hope paul would care if dawn got raped

That was sad yet happy

LOVE it! It was really awesome

Right in the feels...I remember reading this back awhile ago and yet again I am tearing up. Poor Dawn, she should never get raped then again, no one should. Also what Paul said, that is too cute.

"You don't know what its like to make love..."

Dawn and Paul have to my favorite pairing in Pokemon as of right now. I don't know why, but they fit perfectly together.

Read ths way back in the day,, still sniffling and fangirling! v

You should write a sequel!

that was super

i loved the story. it was so cute.

Man...T_T I cried when Paul saw Dawn...

I want another chapter please it was sad and loving in the end love it

make them have sex

make a new chapter so sad BTW i need to know what happens with Dawn and Paul what about her friend.