| Reviews for Defeated |
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bob chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 dza\t mDE m,y peniz vewy hard |
Agbyrdcwyhfdsdgjhdgjbf chapter 4 . 1/16/2016 Man, three years ago ? This is some good shit , tho . Good quality , if I say it myself . Even though you probably won't continue this story , I still hope you see this . Why ? I dunno , it just feels better . Have a great day ! *gives cookie* |
Elizaveta22 chapter 4 . 3/10/2015 Hi there! I really do hope you write more chapters! I'm so into the story, i love the way you portray it. and your writing style is fantastic, even the first chapter that was writen in a bit diffrent style than now was great and I enjoy this a lot! I honestly can't wait for next chapters |
Abyssal Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/10/2014 Dark, quick and nasty, exactly what one looks for in a Link x Dark oneshot. Too many insipid drawn-out love affairs on the site - I like your style. The lemon was made to feel filthy and wrong, and it was well written. Not over exaggerated. Very well done. |
Alfred's Elevator chapter 4 . 10/8/2014 I know your story hasn't been updated in awhile, so you might have abandoned it, but I enjoyed it quite a bit and would like to see more! You're a good writer, and I was very disappointed when I ran out of story. Don't feel pressured to write something you no longer have interest in though, I'll survive the cliffhanger. I watch Sherlock after all, cliffhangers are Sherlockian's domain. |
fan-fan31 chapter 4 . 12/28/2013 This came up in my RSS feed and I was really surprised! I will definitely read the story if you decide to rework it :) I love the Legend of Zelda universe and the pairing as well. |
Farli30519 chapter 3 . 8/22/2011 i love this story so plz, plz update! |
666TheWitch666 chapter 3 . 1/1/2011 I am really enjoying this, you need to update. Like, soon. I love the lack of fluff, and how dark link is being, well, dark. Link's opposite, like he's supposed to be. Its also great the way he shadows Link, popping up at any opportunity. |
BlackWolf2Dragoon chapter 3 . 11/4/2010 This is not a one-shot, please change that in the summary. One-shot~ Manga or pieces of work that consists of only one chapter, hence the ONE-shot. Despite that error, this story is quite good, I think it's quite realistic the damages done towards Link, considering it was non-con, not just rape. (The difference being is that rape, against your wishes completely and utterly. Non-con, against your wishes however your body still reacts errotically towards the actions) No better way to break a hero then his pride, which Link has plenty of, I would say. It's hard to say, considering he never speaks. Nice going :3 ~Blackie |
FreeBelovedArmy chapter 3 . 10/18/2010 D: Poor poor Link ): I really hope you update again soon! |
FreeBelovedArmy chapter 2 . 10/18/2010 D: Link~ D: |
FreeBelovedArmy chapter 1 . 10/18/2010 Aw, poor Link. |
KitsuneDango chapter 3 . 9/8/2010 link! |
darkwolflink1 chapter 3 . 9/7/2010 this is good i can't wait for the rest of this story! you a good writter! keep it up and please post the next few chapters soon. |
random hyper person chapter 3 . 8/9/2010 RHP: *rushing* AH! I GOTTA GO, BUT I MUST SAY: EPIC STORY, PLEASE UPDATE! |