Love your stories and loved reading my first NaruSasu of yours.

Beautiful

Good concept, but a lot of the dialogue was too cheesy and extra for my tastes. It's like, one minute your characters would have a nice vibe going on, and the next one of them would say something hella corny and bam! just like that the romantic moment is ruined. It's much sexier if your characters aren't talking like they're straight out of a bad parody of a romance novel.

very intense self fanning

lovely slow build. good read.

I love the structure of your story. How you make us understand what Sasuke had gone through, and indirectly Naruto too, and how their relationship had started and continued. The deep intensity between them, as much as physically as emotionally. I also like secondary characters and apparences (Kakashi, Tsunade, Jiraiya, Itachi an Kiba-the scene at the station ends in a very funny way!). I loved the whole thing! Thank you very much for sharing it!

omg...

Now that was an epic fic! Thanks for writing :)

very nice

Loved it!

Loved this! Excellent

love love love!

Such a sweet and gorgeous story! I loved the storyline and the way you flipped in time was perfect for their relationship and its development! _
Love your writing style, will have to check out your other work later! :D
x

LOVED IT!

This was amazingly beautiful I loved this story so much. One of the best :) Keep up the good work.