I absolutely love this series and I'm dying to know how it ends up. I understand that you may not have time to write, or maybe real life has gotten in the way, but I really hope that I've day you'll finish this!

I keep coming back to this story in the hope you may have finished it, have really enjoyed it and To War, was hoping I could find out what happened to Quentin etc. I expect real life has got in the way, your girls must be keeping you busy, hope you and they are getting on alright.
You must have got way past Narnia stories but I will keep hoping.

I have re-read your storie twice or more, I'm really hoping you will pick this story up again. I really love it and can't wait to know how all this will end. And even though you haven't finished with this one, I'm hoping there will be more sequels to come. I just really love all your stories. Hope you will continue this someday.

Please continue it’s so good

Will this story be updated soon?

Please finish this story I enjoy reading things when their parents know about Narnia or end up in Narnia somehow I’m liking Quentin as well

I’ve only just discovered this story (and its prequel) and LOVE them! I only wish this story had been finished!

Omgness. I’m writing this in hopes that an active email is still attached to this story and the author can still get reviews! This story is everything I could hope to read! I’ve always imagined what it’d be like to have their mom or a friend of class be in narnia and see them! Then I find this story and it’s bit complete! Oh please finish it! I know this is like 10 years late (which seems impossible) but please! ️️️

This fic is so so wonderful! I do hope you continue this, I'd like to see more Peter in action

I love this story so much! I read it over and over again! Very well written! I think I might write a fic on the Voyage of the Dawn Treader with Helen accompaning Ed and Lucy and Eustace! You helped inspire me with this story! Thanks a ton and keep at it! You're really good!

I love this story so far. I do hope that you continue. However, I would like to voice a simple concern.

Particularly, Lucy seems much too childish, and her siblings treat her as one. She grew to be 23 in Narnia when she reigned, and later spent 1 1/2 years total there again. She grew into a young woman, and I doubt she hardly even remembers having been partially raised in England. Most of all, her siblings would respect her as more than a little sister, but as a strong leader and person. I must admit, I was a little miffed when, a couple chapters ago, Peter said to his mother “Ed, Susan, and I have grown up,” or something to that effect at least. I don’t remember exactly what it was, but I know that you did not mention Lucy.

Thank you for taking the time to read my comments. Hope to receive a notification of an update soon!

Keep writing!
Magmia Flare

Please oh please update this story I want to know what happens to Quentin

Please update I love this story I also really like how you portrait Helen in this story

Hi! I’ve just gotten into the Narnia fandom, and “To War” and this are actually the first fics I’ve read. I sped through them over the weekend and I can’t emphasize enough how much I enjoyed reading both of them.
After taking a quick peek at your profile, I can see that you’ve continued to write over the years, just not on this one. It’s been nearly 9 years, so it’s probably too much to hope that this will ever be continued. Either way, I just wanted to say that both these fics made me extremely happy when I read them. I loved your writing—the characterization, the mix of plot and action, and the relationships and world you’ve built that you’ve managed to make your own. Thank you so much for sharing! If you ever do decide to continue this, just know that you’ll have at least one person who would love to see it happen! :)

Ps: How are your twin girls now? They must be approaching 11 years old by now! I hope you, your girls, and your family are doing well!

UPDATE PLEASE! This is the best Narnia fanfiction I've ever read! I know you have not posted for a long time but I really want to know how this story ends! Pretty Please!