Uh... Such sad story.. :"(.
But I love it anyway :")

this was just lovely and kinda sad

i normally don't review until i finish the whole story that available, but i just have one question, wouldn't kimihiro be april 1st since it's his first name and his first name could be anything his parents wanted it to be, also i feel that having someones last name also be spelled out as their birthday is too much of a coincidence

So sad, yet so romantic.

T.T Why? Why did you break my heart? I saw it coming, but still. My soul died a little. Beautiful figurative language!

Awesome story! Short and beautiful. Just what I like!

Oh god, I loooove this fic. And the ending made me cry... Great job~!

{:( Poor Doumeki, he had waited too long. Far too long. He had his chance so many times, but he waited and longed and held back for too long. Now all he has to look forward to is death. Funny how he will get his wish for I heard that we are made of carbon, the carbon that also lies within the earth. And as our bodies decay it somehow blends within the earth. We become the earth once more.

Kinda sounds depressing and morbid but I'm just speaking my mind on this thing. It would have been lovely to see them get married in this, but things don't always go into plan. Besides, this is okay the way it is I guess.

On a lighter note. . .that was a real play on words what Himawari said to Doumeki.

"I'm sorry, I have the worst of luck" XD Lovely, lovely pun.

Sincerely,

Ah... What a beautiful yet tragic story.

The angst was not overwhelming enough to discourage me from reading, but enough to make my heart wrench in pity. I've only read a handful of stories that could do that, excellent work. (:

very good. very appropriate. I like the ending.

This was seriously hardcore beautiful and angst-y. You're pretty freagin' awesome. The whole thing had a lot of depth that I haven't seen too much in the Donut fandom and very very xHolic, even if it's an AU. You did a great job.

I knew that watanuki was death by time you mentioned about he always wore white. But,is the funeral on his birthday was watanuki's? If so,then his spirit should be kid too..

T.T

i love this story with all my messy mood.

soo...Watanuki was a ghost? at least at the end...That was lovely :D

so sad...D':

now..thats sad. T.T

ah! so one sided love so far :D