Interesting story. XD

Actually, this was GREAT! I LOVE your writing style! You've done a really good job with this one. Even though you got "side-tracked", I think it turned out pretty well. I especially loved your ending.

It was just the right level of dark :)

Good story ]

Update soon pls.

There are several stories abt Ruka going over his thoughts of his love and best friend, but this is one of the best. If the feelings were more pronounced I might've added it to my c2, but I still enjoyed reading this.

This is a great story! Not exactly dark, but it seems to really show Ruka. ; A; I feel so bad for him now.

Ackage! Awesome story! Kind of dark, but you pulled off the angst really well. It wasn't like, emo, but it was dark enough to make me go Wow. So yeah.

Wow again.

Nichuish.

Oh, THANK YOU. You have NO idea just how much I've wanted to read something like this. Something that goes in-depth and actually explores the relationship between those three. And you have just done a brilliant job with this. It's poignant, it perfectly captures the complexity of Ruka's mind, the need, the jealousy, the hesitancy, the worry that he's feeling.

And the words-oh the words. Every paragraph was written beautifully, and expressed the emotions so well. I really cannot convey in my *own* words just what a magnificent job you did writing them.

I really hope to see more such great stories from you! :) You're really a fantastic writer.

Poor Ruka-pyon.

But this is a nice one though.