I do like this so far, though I suggest making it longer and trying to be more descriptive. Aside from that I love it!

another sweet chapter man this is heating up.

I like how this story is progressing so far, It so far has good plot, the grammar is near perfect, I really have enjoyed it up to this point and cannot wait to see the next part.

dame not a bad Chapter

More chapters please!

very nice job keep it up.

I like the idea, but the 3rd chapter's 2 short.

Hooray fanboy/pervy Ash. A bit short but still good. Can't wait for the next chapter. Till then M-kun

Cool chapter on how to bring Ash and the gang into the area since i am assuming that Misty went to go get an Evee. I can't wait for your next update. I can't say that i see Brock doing that just to try and information, but since he was turned down by this Nurse Joy i can see him doing that. well i'll guess i'll be waiting for the next update. Until your next update bye.

Now for the prolouge reveiw. It seems as if Giovanni is after somthing to bring Team Rocket back so now that he has his memory restored he is now after Mewtwo. It looks like it'll be interesting and i am very curious as to where you are going with it. By the way you rally shouldn't hold your story hostage for reveiws because most people only look at the first page of a particular anime/manga area to see if they like anything i am like this category but i do occasionally look into things beyond the first page. Most older stories i find through looking at favorites and stroies written by an author whose page i am looking at. Although 5 reviews is reasonable most people don't like to review for some reason. Oh well i honestly like this fic and where it is going so i would appreciate it if you would update it so Please do update as soon as possible. Ja.

Well since you want five reveiws i'll reveiw for both chapters so i can read more. Very interesting and Mewtwo is liking being a part of the family nice. They way you said sold it sounds like Tomoyo is hating to do that but only doing it out of necessity for survival. Well that's all i'll say for this reveiw and now onto the the prolouge cause i really want to read more of this.

This looks like it is going to be a great story. Please write more as soon as possible. I can't wait to find out what happens! Hope to read more soon!

wow that was good i can not wait to see the next chapter please up date soon

wow this sounds good please uodate soon and by the way who of Ashs friends will be in it since giovanni will be going after Mewtwo and the only people who now of mewtwo is Ash Brock Misty James Jesse and meowth i do now that May and max do not know of Mewtwo so i wuold like to see how this all plays out