WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?! that was mostly sexual stuff[actually, it all was] i was expecting to be a bit... funny like the other ones i read... still, where in all the hells did you get this ****?

omfg OROCHIMARU DIES

o/o *gulp* "oh...no" / "WAAAAAH!" (MAJOR NOSEBLEED) -Sand Siblings walk in- *blink twice* Gaara "She did it again didn't she, Temari?" Temari "Yeah,she did.*sigh*" Kankouro "Let's get her cleaned up...I'll get the mop and cleaner." Temari "Me and Gaara will get her cleaned upstairs"

...Woah, that's some birthday. Man if only orochimaru was real mmmm so many wrong thoughts invade my head right now. That was amazing MORE PLEASE -major fangirl nosebleed-

This one too. -Favs-

Over all pretty good ;) my only suggestion is having kabuto address oro as orochimaru-sama... Maybe it's just me, but i find that infinitely more arousing, don't ask me why XD

*drool*

Dang, this story is HOT! HOT! Great job! Love this pairing! X3

~Anima~

that was fuking hot! i loved it so gotta take care of myself now :D

hawt! i wish i'd get such a bday present. in either role. but none of them is here, and i'm not lucky to be male XD

O.O ... -

one word sexxi O.o tee hee / *nosebleed*

gah goo blah hm yum * sorry the danger pony is incapable of coherent words at the moment please check back later*

DAMN!

M... Yummy...

OMG! That was freaking awesome! I loved it!