Great job. Very in character.

I Lois this season. I can so relate to her emotional rollercoaster. This was really great.

this is great. :)

Loved it. Well done! :)

I love it dude, you are a really an awesome writer. It's nice to see quality fic on ff.

Clois Love

Oh and you did a great job, imo, keeping them in character.

Super excited to see what is coming up next from you.

As with all Clois lovers, I am OBSESSED with Committed. There has never been a better episode of Smallville. Ever. Except perhaps Instinct, because that was the first time their relationship was directly referenced by a character. THANK YOU MAXIMA, EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE A VILLAINESS!

You are a VERY good writer, and I hope to see more from you!

That was a very good story. I enjoyed it and you did a very good job writing it :)

I like the way you write the characters and get at their inner dialogue. It really rings true. I hope you get inspired more to write more Clois. You do it really well.