Reviews for Fearful Symmetry
Cyllan Anassan chapter 7 . 7/13/2015
Oh, dear... Such a shame you are not writing any more Kung Fu Panda fics. Sadly I found your story far too late.
Still, I just feel the need to review. So, I can say for sure that this is probably the first OC I find myself loving so far. Werner was a relief as a character, mostly because he was unpredictable. Seriously, If you can get someone to like a character as selfish, greedy and cold as him is simply because you're an amazing writer.
Another thing that made this story so amazing was both the lack of romance -I'm just getting increasingly tired of those- and the crude way everything was displayed. It felt just like a real kidnap is suposse to be like. And Tigress played her part splendidly, showing both her rational composed nature and her stong will.
The ending did seem a little bit rushed, though. But is a small detail compared to everything else.
Anyway, if you ever decide to write about KFP I'll definibly be reading you.
KaylaDestroyer chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
This was a pretty awesome story! One of the few KFP stories I write a review for. Mainly because I'm an

Ice Age writer fan and reading KFP is usually for when nothing is going on inn my usual section. But I really liked this story! :)
Missng chapter 7 . 4/21/2010
The last two chapters were kind of awkward, the Alexander part a little rushed in the introduction and scant in the description of the city. You had some spelling errors here and there, but they were pretty minor. I felt like the ending was rather abrupt, but the dialogue did wrap the story up well enough. All in all a good read. Though I never did get into Kung-Fu panda. Thanks for the adventure.
Missng chapter 6 . 4/21/2010
I'm an idiot, it's a poem. Didn't see that at all... my bad.
Missng chapter 5 . 4/21/2010
You missed some "w's". But vatever. heh. And your chapter titles are starting to confuse me as they seem to have nothing to do with the contents of the chapter. Other than that though, this is just fun to read...
Missng chapter 3 . 4/21/2010
Oh, that was dark. Fun stuff. And yes, I do like him only because of his accent. fwahaha...
Missng chapter 2 . 4/21/2010
Pft, boring chapter my butt. This was important and you wrote it well. Totally feel like I'm reading the screenplay for the sequel. I'm liking this so far. :]
Kajarn chapter 7 . 10/20/2009
I liked reading this one too. Now that I've finally seen (most of) Kung-Fu Panda, this caught my eye. It is very well written and everything flows smoothly from one scene to the next.

I especially love how you worked out the chapter titles.
Russet Sprouts chapter 7 . 10/18/2009
man, i like your chapter titles...

T&R
BowTiesandBooks chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I am defiantly putting this story on my favourites! I like the way you put the chapters in a poem; Tigress, Tigress, burning bright, in the forests of the night,what immortal hand or eye, dare frame thy, Fearful Symmetry.
Probe-Z 1433 chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Great story, nice to see some people are using bounty hunters, I wish there were more stories with bounty hunters.
Bovine Beauty chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Wow; that was a great Kung Fu Panda story written. King Fu Panda has already become one of my favorite non-Disney animated features already. And I usually like to read the ones about Tigress in a tight situation and the reader starts to wonder how she will plan to get herself out of this mess. Those are my favorite type of stories to read, as long as everything turns out alright in the end. I can't bear unhappy endings. My other friend doesn't like Tigress much because of how she behaved toward Po in the beginning, but I still love the movie. Overall, I enjoyed this story, even if it was only seven chapters. Long or short, I still loved it. We need more stories like this. I would write a Kung Fu Panda fic on Tigress myself, but I'd have to do research on Chinese culture and their way of life because I only know what I've seen in movies and television. And I've seen other writers in this section write better Kung Fu Panda stories than I would have if I tried.

Anyways Werner was an awesome wolf character, though I would have expected him to not let his prisoner defeat him that easily. But it seemed that Tigress had snapped and would not put up with his behavior any longer. So she did what had to be done. The ending was fine, yet I also would have expected Master Shifu to negotiate with Alexander afterward. But once again, great job.
FalconMage chapter 7 . 11/28/2008
So, this is the end of the chapter, huh? Kinda short but this was a really good story to go. I'm really impressed with it and all the good OCs that I see. It was really nice and great to be the first reviwer to see this story. The first of the story was amazing and the last was something where only some of us are albe to grasp the meaning of life. Tigress has and she had finally understood it. Great!

I don't know why Tigress wants to bring Werner or Alexander back but imprisonment won't do any good in my opinion. Shifu could have change Alexander as this mighty lion has more than what he looks like. He has the knowledge and know-how of commanding an army and could have brought great things to the Jade Palace. As for Werner, I'm not sure about him. It's so sad to see him in this state. Okay, I admit that it's stupid for me to say it after what he had done to the small children and Tigress but no one deserves to be treated the way he is. Having mixed feelings on things and I just can't understand it. Can't find words to explain how to think about it.

It was really great to have seen this whole story develop from the start till done and I appreciate it. Well done! I hope to see more later on.

Peace and love

-FalconMage aka Thanatos
FalconMage chapter 6 . 11/28/2008
Wow... Okay, once again, and again, and again. I'm so freakin' sorry for giving in a late reply. It was so late that the next chapter was even up before I can find the time to read stories. I saw it in my inbox but I left it there so that I can find the time to read it. Now is the time. Tigress had finally won over Werner and this was nothing I had expected, nothing at the very least. I thought Werner was like the main character here and could do better than that.

Alexander was a very compelling character to be exact. He has the idealogy of a certain character that I think I know but I can't remember what. He wants the perfect haven of living for people. Yes, that idealogy is good and perfect in all sense but he needs to know that by doing this, he's fettering them with invisible chains and the poeple cannot make their own decision by themselves. It's all about his decision and nothing more. I think that is why the streets are kinda empty.

I agree with Tigress that she should decline the offer. I would do the same as well. Alexander seems like a good lion to agree upon. He even had planned on the thought of Tigress to take care of Werner! He has already known that from the start but Werner didn't. Which makes him at and disadvantage. The impacts of the story was great and moves were precise. I love it. I'm so sorry that I couldn't review earlier but better late than never. ..
corset-rebellion-follower chapter 7 . 11/26/2008
This is a good chapter. The end was a little short, but it was still good.
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