That was really good. Better then anything I've done. I've written a song fic. It's hard and you did good. Lol just remembered babe... that'll do, writer. That'll do.

-drool- Muy sexy, hun, and no, your not the only Vexord fan out there!

Crack pairings are luvz! ANYways, just wanted to say this story was really good and definately an auto-fave!

It's soo sad but I'm loving it to pieces.

hehe it was good for ur first songfic good work

Great Job! I liked it :D

Too bad Vexen didn't just up and leave though. I would have. Luxord was an ahole at the beginning. D: But Vexen never learns.

Silly Vexen.

XD

I don't hate Luxord, I lurve him :C

And yes... words like that really do hurt and the pain never fully goes away. Did you know that physical pain actually hurts less?

I felt very bad for Vexen, mostly because I can relate to what he's going through... since well.. I lived through it.

I really wish that he wouldn't have stood for it anymore, honestly. I wish that he would've left. Or that he would've made Luxord get some help for is addictions if he was going to stay. Seriously, no one deserves that.

I think that you did an excellent job on your first fanfic Samaloo... I just would've liked to have seen Vexen stand up for himself, obviously.

Despite being in love with someone who's abusive, everybody has a point where they snap after being abused for so long. I wanted to see Vexen snap back at Luxord instead of being completely submissive like a beaten dog.

Vexen goes through the insults, the pain, and being used, and doesn't say one word. Nothing to Luxord in his own defense or to anyone else to vent.

More often than not, it's more painful to keep something like that bottled up inside like that than the initial pain.

Its not that I didn't like what you wrote, I did, but I would've rather seen that.

Overall, great job. You did a wonderful job of portraying how Vexen felt and the drunkard gambler, Luxord, as well as the minor characters such as Axel. If I were Axel, I'd be sick of Luxord's sh*t too and show my hostility.

Idunno what else to say besides: I actually liked Vexen more than Luxord in this, cus Luxord was a sob and acted very much like my dad did.

Goodbye for now,

An-chan

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No matter how hard I try, you're never satisfied, this is not a home I think I'm better off alone.