This show is how I learnt the seven deadly sins. Lol.

Another great poem, Every time I read it each stanza comes out in that character's voice :) Like a lot of your poems it feels like it would work well as a song too. I'm also a fan of explorations of the seven deadly sins as ideas in art, it works really well even without necessarily being set in Fullmetal Alchemist.

I think I'll make a poster of this. You are my official favorite writer/muse feeder/inspiration. Wowz.

this was awesome.

Wow, that was a good poem. The way you described them fit them perfectly. I read this instead of doing my English homework.

That was just perfect,it kind of renembers me of my religion teacher,but,unlike your fic,she is boring,now everytime she talks about the sins,my mind floats into the Homunculi Dimension

Im a dream,so I must be Sloth O.o

I literally loled at the english homework part lol

0_0...this is waaaaaay better than any poems i can write...you know,i always seem to try to write stuff very in that poem about mummies i had to do,i found a way to make it all dramatic and im,like,a im also a can figure that out by all the "like"s i put in my poem is way good...i love ,you know,ALL angst-like poems are favorite poems are dark and the one in the first book in the gross and tragic "Demonata" series,called "lord Loss".both poem and book is called Loss is evil and poem goes like

"Lord Loss sows all the sorrows of the world

Lord Loss seeds the grief starched trees

In the center of the web,vile Lord Loss torments the dead

In the center of the web,Lord Loss crawls

dispensing pain,despising all

shuns friends,nurtures foes

ravages hope,breeds woe

In the center of the web,lowly Lord Loss is all that's left"

ok,there is NO WAY that this is the whole just writing down all the parts i can no doubt i got some parts ,why am i making my review this long?it's stupid...and your poem is awesome...so are ellipses...

wow... i like it! we are you at the end is kinda creepy... and yeah, doing homework is boring XD

I like this story it was really well written and it was great. Thank you for writing it.:)

It fits them perfectly.

That was pretty good. Nice work.

This English homework (...sloth, anyone? D)

Heh, I usually listen to music and draw when I dont do my homework...that does remind me i have to finish my book report...by tomorow...and take my retests...and have tests...and...math homework...wow...i've a lot to do...

mehh...

well great poem!

makens me want to draw them...hehe

well ja!

Oh wow, this is brilliant!