like the chapter, but wouldn't naruto injuries be healed by kurama

Ur making me cry wtf

It would be cool to read a version of this with Naruto in Anbu and not so terrified of everything and everyone. It seems as if he is constantly under attack. What happened to the academy teacher since they didn't kill him?

Why didn't Naruto use his eyes? I think in this situation he should have used them.

I'm confused doesn't Shikaku have a position of authority in t the village?

Goddamnit! I'm a sobbing mess since I've read chapter 1, and my tears won't stop pouring. Honestly, Naruto is too kind in this harsh world.

ahhhhh... my heart is still breaking, thank you so much for sharing this wonderful work. I really appreciate it.

*sob*sob*

In all the people the rinnegan has awoken in, it has beenPurple/Violet
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Great job on the story, I love it

irukas sentence I cannot watch as on of my students lives a life of pain and lonliness anymore: that gave me such a good idea for a picture its where the whole of rookie twelve are walking along a road with sakura trees on each side with leaves falling around them and its daybreak but naruto is walking to the side with no one depicting loneliness and despair while everyone else is talking showing all the good emotions there are the background is supposed to depict hope happiness and awe for the future it also shows that they are the villages future please if you know how to make a online picture please create it just the revalation of the idea filled my dark heart with such happiness it almost made me cry in happiness

irukas sentence I cannot watch as on of my students lives a life of pain and lonliness anymore: that gave me such a good idea for a picture its where the whole of rookie twelve are walking along a road with sakura trees on each side with leaves falling around them and its daybreak but naruto is walking to the side with no one depicting loneliness and despair while everyone else is talking showing all the good emotions there are the background is supposed to depict hope happiness and awe for the future it also shows that they are the villages future please if you know how to make a online picture please create it just the revalation of the idea filled my dark heart with such happiness it almost made me cry in happiness

he is is scared cause he thinks naruto isvulnerable" even though he just tried to put naruto back in the orphanage even though they have been beating him daily

he is is scared cause he thinks naruto isvulnerable" even though he just tried to put naruto back in the orphanage even though they have been beating him daily

Great job please continue

truly emotional

I fuck hate where that stupid post review button is on my phone I keep pressing the stupid fucking button before I can finish my stupid fucking review...

anyways trying to complete my last reviews I'll quickly summarize what I was going to explain in detail the battle the mercenarie commander was a bit dumb and should have ended way sooner than it did with naruto putting the guy in a coma ,however do nat take this personally I still very much enjoy the story it was just driving me crazy anyways I know you'll never read this but whatever I wish you luck in wherever life has lead