This is was cute and wholesome! I wish there were more cute fics like this that showed seb's fatherly relationship with ciel.

I want to give this a ten. This was well written and had both hidden and shown depth dipped in throughout the story . With the right amount of fluff and angst with a methomorical side as well, this succeeds most fanfictions . However, there are similar fics to this , multiple spelling errors , and it leaves on an unsatisfactory end so 9.5. Please continue this , as you are a great author and you should publish a story one day . I am writing a book myself , and if you have any writing tips to bestow upon me , I would ever be so greatful . I may be only twelve , but I would be considerably thankful . Great job , and good day to you , fellow writer . Hope to compete with you for book sales someday .

This was a good story

Awww~poor Ciel

I cried. Like legitly cried. I've read it like five times now. I LOVE the paternalness of Sebastian in this. And I usually don't because I ship the two together. But this..this is magnificent. It's about damn time ciel let himself be the little kid never got to be. Ahh so good. I'm going to cry now.

Kya this fic is soo cute~~ loved it!

Awww

I fricken loved it. Great job.

MORE!

I love this so much, so adorable c:
Definitely one of the best I've read!

I loved it!

omg I love this so much

Gosh, am I crying? this story's so cuddly and cutie

So cute

Cute piz. Continue