This was so cute. *snickers* John should know he can't best Teyla. Silly kitty,can't beat the Fae. lol Great stuff. Well done. Cheers! }:O

Raven

“Do you know how freaky it is hearing a Sidhe throwing out Star Wars Speak?” He chuffed. “Yes, let’s continue to take advantage of one of the five rain-free days here.”

“Good.” A stick flashed out, and John yelped and hopped forward. “Tag, you’re it.” Then she tore off down the path.

I greatly enjoyed this little interlude. And I adore John/Teyla. Again, you do such a fine job with your characterizations and voice.

Not sure I get what's going on here but I liked the story.

I absolutely CANNOT wait for the sequel! This AU is amazing - do you have an ETA for the next story?

Hurrah, more Vargyr!John and Fae!Teyla. Made my night, and I can't wait to see the sequel to untamed!

Ooh, that was nice. Vargyr John . . . I can relate, Teyla. I can relate.

:-D

-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)

oh THANK YOU! I needed that! lovely furry, musky, gorgeous...hm. DAMN! wake up woman youa re at work! More Untamed please! Faerie55

I'm not sure what John is here (what's a vargyr?) so I was a little confused but I enjoyed this nonetheless. The joy they took in playing/fighting together and each other's company was wonderfully done. I think you really captured their connection, humor and chemistry. I look forward to more! Thanks for sharing.

it was fun but a little confusing...john is a cat that can transform right? plz write more it waz cool!

That was fun. Sorry you had a crappy week. Hope you feel better now?

That was fun X3 I needed it because this has definitely been a rough day. Thanks!

and it's nice to hear an update about the sequel! Take your time! The best things in life are worth the wait.

I can see how John in a pair of cut off shorts can produce such a wonderful story.

Sorry you have a bad week, but glad that you wrote this little ditty.

Keep smiling.

Karen

How come when you have a bad week a wonderful story like this is the result and my bad weeks usually end with me gaining 3 lbs.?

I really do want you to have a good life so blessings! But please continue; I really need good stories like yours to keep my world happy!