| Reviews for Forgotten Powers |
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  The Critic chapter 2 . 11/15/2019 Cliche. The only thing that generates interest is that Luffy seems smarter and more mature. Seriously though, abused backstory, lame and cliche, plus, while Garp is hardly ever there, you really think he wouldn't find out or are you lacking that much foresight to see that your backstory is flawed and has enough holes to be considered swiss cheese? And even if the mountain bandits didn't pay attention to him, even they would have noticed, why, you unintellectual, is because, something happens to him, they're getting thrown in jail. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/13/2019 Your story..I'm astounded |
 jupimako chapter 11 . 4/14/2018 Thank you for an absolutely wonderful story! I loved every second. |
| BookWarrior23 chapter 11 . 2/1/2017 I love this story so much! You wrote it really well. Would you be interested in writing another story and/or one-shot with Luffy and Robin since you made Luffy's childhood similar to hers. I feel that you could put a lot of emotion into something like that. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2016 This is so Cooooooooooooooooooool |
| BlindieMac chapter 11 . 3/8/2016 This was so good! I really loved it! |
| Frost the Mischief chapter 11 . 10/26/2015 I am trully in love with this story *hearts eyes* Hope to read mooooore _ :D |
| CMBrockett chapter 11 . 8/3/2015 Sweet, insightful in regards to human psychology, and funny. |
| ThisIsLightful chapter 11 . 8/1/2015 That. Was. ADORABLE! Thank you for writing this! And I'm sorry for those reveiwers you mentioned who were being buttmunchers, your story is awesome! Only problem I have is that you often use this ' instead of this " , but that isn't really a problem, because the story is awesome and the writing was great! What's a little quote mark and apostrophe compared to that? Anyways, it was awesome and the idea was fantastic! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/13/2014 I feel like this setting would be more suited for him learning haku really quick, then going and learning magic (from Rayleigh?) for a year |
| Luffy D. Hancock chapter 6 . 10/20/2014 *Stares* yeah i though he was suppose to be more mature now too xD |
| Luffy D. Hancock chapter 3 . 10/20/2014 Seems suge ima keep reading |
| Luffy D. Hancock chapter 2 . 10/20/2014 THATS CHILD ABUSE! xD |
| dreamsteampunk chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 LOVE the idea, and the changed Luffy. The grammar and spelling need a bit of work, but hey, it's a fic, what can you do? |
| doubledamn chapter 11 . 8/2/2013 Nice story, glad the good guys won with little to no repercussions. There was only one thing missing, you kept hinting at throughout the story, but it never really went anywhere. The aspect of LuNa. I really expected more. Oh well, you did good mate. Keep it up. |
