You captured Elle very well here: innocence and sadism. I love it. Please continue!

Fascinating. I look forward to seeing where you're going with this.

Not if you know this story, I draw your attention because it seems to capture the essence of your fanfic. It's in Portuguese, but you can use a translator like me to read. It might inspire you to a first date between Peter and Elle.

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That exciting!. I hope that Peter and Elle to save the baby and give the villain a good beating.

First off, sorry for the misspellings, is that I am Spanish. I love the history, I hope that continues with her soon. Peter would be nice to keep it secret to Elle and the baby to protect them from the Company. No one would know them, not even Nathan, that would give more play to history. What do you think? See you later.

Yay I want more please...

Hm... where is this going?

This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Whoa!

What's happening to Elle?

I really like Adam's rules. And I'm glad that Elle and Peter are together now.

Please update soon! I love it!

More! Soon!

Lovingn the friendly Adam Elle interaction

I love how you have written Elle. It sounds like she has the mental capacity of a child and the child like innocence you have characterized her having just amplifies her ignorance. Update soon!

I like the interactions between Adam and Elle. They're both perfectly in character, and I can see them being close when he was locked up.