This is a great Sousuke/Kaname and well early it reminds me of how Sousuke was mostly a fish out of war in civilian life.

"I was waiting-"

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

how come us girls are always ten steps ahead of the boys? :3

(I bet she overheard them talking)

mou, why'd you have to make my beloved Sousuke act like a nervous wreck.

but then again, he's like that.. ahehe..

nice fic! keep up the good work.

its actually nice to see some real romance between the two characters... the restrained romantic subplot in the actual story frustrates me!

very cute ! simple and cute. congratulations.

good story. i liked it. keep it up!

Aw, le cuteness!

very cute and simple story.

nice read.

AW! That was so incredibly SWEET! I loved it! I can't get this huge grin on my face. Lol! Aah! Sousuke... he's great.

Very good, I didn't really feel that Kaname was really written as herself, but you did really good with Sousuke.

Aw, that was cute. :D Love it! Bunches! :D :D :D You're writing style is so fun to read! Not too much detail, not too much blandness. Good job!

I've spent the better part of the last week trying to plot out a similar scene for the story I'm writing; it's friggin' hard to get Sousuke to just SAY SOMETHING.

Good work here. I like Kaname's reaction. She's not such a meanie, when she's in a good mood. Love the guys' advice to Sousuke, tho.