| Reviews for Ice Cream |
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MysteriOues Girl chapter 1 . 9/1 That was beautiful! |
MlleFairy chapter 1 . 7/7 Sad and cute ️ |
SkullVenom chapter 1 . 6/12/2019 i like this story |
brenda sianipar chapter 1 . 1/5/2019 wow, the way you write is PERFECT! you’re so talented! thank you sm for your stories!:) |
Good chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 How many stories I have to look through to find a decent one, not alone a good one. Do you know how a story is good? When you find yourself hoping it will go on a little bit more ... draw out that thread beyond the climax to reach something that's on the next turn of a page. This was good. Great, fantastic, incredible ... those are reserved for real stories, this was a good snippet. ~JSM |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2018 Awesome |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2017 AHHHHHHHHHHHH ITS GOOOOD I"m SOBBINGGGGG. One thing though, it would make for an amazing plot if sakura tried to kill herself during her greiving period following beating up naruto. |
DUH BOMB chapter 1 . 12/1/2015 That's so awesome! Angsty but cool |
PoptartsToaster chapter 1 . 2/23/2015 That's like really sweet of him to do for her... It shows how far he would go for her as long as she smiles again. I'm sorry I seriously don't understand anyone who wants Sasuke and Sakura together...? What Naruto does for her far surpasses ANYTHING that Sasuke ever done for her. To be honest I truly don't remember anything that Sasuke did for her that had shown any type of love for her. It's basically only teammate/comrade care. I swear he did more for Naruto than he did for Sakura xD. Naruto would jump in front of a projectile if it was aiming at Sakura just to keep her save, I don't see Sasuke ever doing that. And remember that time when them 3 was on that mission with that guy named Idate I think for the race? When they fell in the river/ocean that formed a whirlpool, Sasuke left them to drown when Naruto went to save Sakura when she was unconscious. Lol sorry for the rant I just felt I should put that out there for Sasusaku fans. . |
Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 10/12/2014 That was beautiful and heartbreaking. |
melb623 chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 Beautiful story. I loved every bit of it1 |
azfaerydust chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 That was beautiful...sad, but beautiful. |
canonOTP chapter 1 . 6/18/2013 The end conversation was very well written. I feel like you had the characterization nailed perfectly. I especially liked how you portrayed naruto at the end, it captured their relationship perfectly. Firm, yet aggressive. He knows what he wants and shows it in a 'naruto' like fashion. Would like to read more like this from you! |
Well done chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 You managed this with excellence. The end is a bit abrupt leaving me a bit confused with the intensity of the emotions. But overall, I really enjoyed this. jsm |
Tanneal chapter 1 . 9/3/2012 WOW! Simply outta this world |