perfect i came so hard

Amazing just so amazing you should write one were Hermione sneaks in Harry's room and sucks his cock

Too boring

I actually enjoyed this

That was fun and well written. Thanks for sharing it.

I myself hate when ever Harry and Cho are shipped in a fanfiction. I feel Ginny deserves Harry more.

Its quite nice story and to be honest i got turned on realy quickly so great job :D though you can add some intense plot in future stories and that can mean a lot to who is reading story :D

Not too bad. a nice little PWP fic.

Great story. You wrote two teenager exploring each others bodies well. It always seemed like Harry and Cho could hand made up if they gave it a try in the books.
I'm going to look into your other work later on.

They had sex in the perfects bath room

so good I'm not gonna lie I have a boner now thanks

i always did think they gave up on the relationship way to easily.

That was awesome. Ahha loved the end. Sweet and smutty. Perfectly accurate with the awkward teen interactions. Well written.

Bloody hell, that was fantastic. I love it! Just the sexual interaction in itself provides a very good plot. You portrayed a very nice dynamic.

Best regards, RJ Kimasako

"harry I'm wet" "I'm pretty hard myself" you killed me!