OMFG Best Meta&Jiggly love story ever!

cool story

This is a case of good writer, terrible pairing. Once I read one story of an author's, I tend to most of them- providing it is a fandom I like or know. Jigglypuff x Meta Knight is illogical, unsubstantiated and only exists based on aesthetics. However, this is review is not meant to be a place where I can freely express my views on the dreaded "Puffball Shipping."

For somebody who wrote in the first person for the first time, it was very well done. It's an excellent way to narrate emotion; both rawly and intimately. You tend to do well with writings concerning confusing/conflicting emotions.

My only impersonal critique is this: Ganondorf was incredibly out of character. I'm guessing you've never played a Zelda game before, so that is why you don't know that Ganondorf far exceeds bullying- he's pure evil. Perhaps Bowser would have been more suited to this.

I also found how you used the animé Meta Knight rather than the video game Meta Knight to be the easier choice. This isn't criticism. If you were to choose the game-Meta Knight, no romance could have occurred.

Please don't take this as patronisation- I really, wholeheartedly applaud you for writing Jigglypuff and Meta Knight together, because it's simply put, completely ridiculous; a novelty. The level of depth you added to otherwise shallow characterisations was wonderful.

This is not original, but I still found myself with a smile. I guess I'm a sucker for corny romance.

I REACHED MY PM LIMIT AGAIN AHHH sorry anyways haha i like it it's cool you are awesome your Shadamy story is comin along good i hope you like it! Haha keep up the good work LOVE YOU! :)

so swet!

This is great.

That was absolutely positively F-A-N-T-A-B-U-L-O-U-S!

Hey, I read Admiration, and It was so great! It is definetley going into favorites! I like POV's from the girl's point of view, so I basicaly just said more words thatn I had to (LOL) But I'm not joking I love it!

Hehe, I'd never really have imagined this pairing working, but you pulled it off brilliantly. With cuteness, but not too much, with love, but not too much. I'm favouriting this. ;)

-Charlotte

Another great story! Once again, excellent job with their emotions and ecxellent spelling and grammar. This story is so good.

Oh Wow! Another awesome one-shot by Mind Seeker! Number one writer of Meta Knight and Jigglypuff one-shots!

That story kicked massive butt. Great job, especially for your first time writing in first person! I would have to say my favorite part was when Meta stopped Ganon and Dedede. XD God, Dedede was hilarious.

I also loved the part where Meta thought, "I'm not cute, I'm not cute!" XD Sweetness!

Loved it! Great job again!

-Umbreon Mastah

Kawaii! omg these last few fan fics i read from you, you made Meta Knight a softy! But, at least he confessed his love to Jigglypuff! Can't wait for your next masterpiece!

-Sinceraly, Starlightjuliet

Cute! Loved it! I laughed at the part when Jigglypuff complained about Meta Knight, and when she turned around he was there. xD I dunno, just thought it was a little funny and cute. x3

That was really good. You're getting quite good with Meta Knight's character. I think I liked Meta's POV and the part where Jigglypuff is complaining about him to Marth and Zelda, and then he appears.

Keep up the good work!

-Darkest Daughter