I hope for Bella and Jacob's sakes that Edward and the Cullens help het rid of Victoria and leave.

It is hot and I do want more, but everything is believable. Keep up the good work. Jacob's relationship with Quil and Embry is so them. They're truly brothers and friends with no filter.

Jacob was right about Bella thinking too much and being concerned about being friends with benefits with Jake. How will he make her see that they're just right for each other?

Please update! :'(

So Bella thinks Jake is good enough to fuck but ot good enough to love. Yea sounds like Bella. At least Jke is getting something to make putting up with Bellas crap, her selfishness and sick twisted soul worth it. Now that he has figured things out he needs to toss Bella overboard before she does it too him (being this is Bella it is inevitable). Once he finds out that this kind of recreation can be had with many females especially if a guy looks like Jake does he will be overjoyed not to have to deal with any nonsense.

Guess your "muse" dropped dead. I cant stand writers that beg for reviews ask for help with the plot that they should have mapped out before they started and then dont finish. Thats just rrude.

Uhhh are you actually begging for reviews?
What are you like 6 years old. Your story is ok..but lets be real You should consider yourself lucky that your getting a few word reviews. This is not Shakespeare darlin and i doubt you will be getting any NY times level book reviews so how about you get over yourself.. MMkay?

Has to beat trying to have sex with a piece of marble..cold, skinny, pale and dead.
Bella needed to know tthe difference.

I would love for you to write more! Chapter 4 had a delicious combination of plot and sex. Getting more of Jake's feelings and excitement across is delightful. I realize it's been a millennia since you last updated this story, but I want more!

Amazing... loving it... keep up the great work... ps that's alot more than "wow hot" lol but it true both of them...

I loved the story. It was the first time I read a good fic of Jacob & Bella in New Moon and I think it's fantastic. I would love to read more :)

Ha ha, love the off with his head. They are just to good together..

Now this is how it should've been! Great job

Loved this little jewel!

Incredibly hot stuff here. Don't worry about Jake's language, we don't mind! Really fun and hot and we are just happy to see them together. Unlike Edward, who is going to have a hard time when he realizes Bella is with Jacob. Thanks for writing. Wish there was more!

You did not just stop writing!