Despite all the implausible details and weaknesses in the scenario: How come Alice didn't see anything, what caused Edward's weakness, why didn't Bella just used a phone to call Carlisle at first...) it was a fun ride...

Thank you

i so wanna rip this mans throat out, and im so like come on edward get up nooooooooooo

But how could be that Ted has poisoned Edward! HOOWW?!
Ted was not with them when Edward was crying!

It all started with that tear!

I really like this story, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. I always enjoy plots that are a little backwards; the ones where Bella has to save Edward. Thank you for the great story!

Okay, I am loving the story, but wouldn't calling ANY of the family have been faster than dillydallying with trying to get Edward down the stairs? I mean, I know that the way Stephenie Meyer wrote Bella intentionally, that she is supposed to be stupid and weak, but I never got that. I guess it's just my feminism projecting, but Bella is so much smarter than you have just made her out to be.

Come on Edward - wake up!

This is such a great read!

Wowza!

I loved this chapter! Good job!

Okay, I may be an idiot, but I had absolutely no idea what was going on. Of course, that might be because I didn't quite read the whole thing...

I loved it.

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Thank you for a satisfying ending...

This Ted is such a self-righteous hypocrite...

This is really different! Can't wait to see what happens. Surely Ed and Bella get out or are rescued.

This story should have more reviews.

will do