Wish there was more

Liked it

Interesting

I like your version better

this was cute I loved it.

Aww cute! And I agree! Things are so much easier with magic!

This was great. Well done

Such a good title! Very funny (I'm gonna read ALL your Merlin ones so sorry for the mass of reviews:P)

Arthur knows and he doesn't care that Merlin has magic, SWEET!

x x x

Hannah

omg i only just worked out that the person i've been chatting to for ages wrote one of my favourite stories! i am thick and if you didn't pick it up before then I'll say it again. I love this fic. I love the bit 'for camelot' and Arthur thinks 'for Merlin' i just go aw! ;p ly shadows

I thought it was nice seeing Arthurs jeluse side *cookies for you* lol

Heyy :D

I'm going to review as I go along (:

Arthur’s eyes narrowed as he gave his speech about The Knights of Camelot. Merlin was standing behind the swords with a man Arthur had never seen before. His servant and Merlin’s ‘friend’ were rather close to the man and Arthur felt jealousy wrap around his heart and stomach.

“You minute…starts now” He swung his sword and blocked the incoming blow. Merlin was his not some other man’s, his. With a growl Arthur saw the strangers face on his opponent. His eyes flashed and he sent the man to the ground with a knee to his chest “Come back when you’re better” he snapped he caught Merlin’s eye and his younger servant smiled at him before walking off with the stranger. Arthur gave another growl of frustration under his breath and spun out an attack on his knights who only just reacted in time but they started to give him a fight thinking it was just a test not a vent for Arthur.

Oh Arthur is jealous :P

“I think I could help”

“You?” Arthur laughed “Merlin you don’t know the difference between the blade and the hilt of a sword” Merlin scowled at his head and Arthur smiled inwardly glad he had gotten his own back on the young man.

xDD lol :p poor merlin. haha.

His Merlin was lying to him for some common stranger!

aww "his Merlin", that's cute (:

Arthur was fuming. Merlin had never come to him in the evening nor had he appeared that morning and when Arthur went to look for him he was with bloody Lancelot! They were also sharing a bed! Merlin was his! No one touched what was his. His eyes narrowed when he saw Lancelot sharpening his sword. Sneaking over he lent against one of the support beams and grabbed a broom. He threw it at Lancelot and the man caught it easily.

LMAO :P a jealous arthur really is funny :P

“Lets get one thing straight…Merlin is mine. My servant, my friend. Understand?”

Haha he really is jealous isn't he :P

“For Camelot!” Arthur shouted and the knights echoed him ‘For Merlin’ he thought as the griffin dove for them.

aww for merlin (:

“Yes” he smiled “He tried but I don’t belong here…not yet…and don’t worry your secrets are safe with me”

“What…”

“I saw that kiss” he nudged him and repeated the chant “and heard you”

“Oh.”

:P

this actually ties in perfectly with the episode! Oh it should be put in! :P

“Next time I’m a jealous arse you have permission to hit me”

“Ok” he chuckled snuggling into Arthur’s neck

“We need to have a talk” Merlin groaned

“About?”

“Don’t think I didn’t hear you casting a spell…why didn’t you tell me you had magic”

“Yes Arthur your male lover has magic like I need any more reason to be killed!”

“Don’t be such a grouch…you can do extremely cool things and pamper me with just a flick of your wrist…ok that sounds wrong” Merlin chuckled and nodded Arthur sniggered and pushed Merlin over to his bed “Opps its creased you’ll just have to make it again”

“You are an arse”

xD lmao :P

“I didn’t say anything!” he shrieked as Arthur tried to kiss him again “Stop it!” he laughed Arthur chuckled and kissed him again making Merlin give in and kiss him back.

“Arse” he muttered.

haha

aw that was cute!

love it (:

keep up the good work!

izzy

“You are an arse”

“A royal and beautiful arse” he grinned kissing the younger man cutting off his reply. “See you can’t disagree” he grinned

omg totally loved this part x"D

I loved the jealous arthur and then mrogana and lancelot keeping the secret a secret lolz.

Loved it,un! x

x Neko-Chan

aww cute ending! It does make sense that he is jealous of Lancelot, so overall a very sweet fic I love how you write Merlin and Arthur together!

Hello!

Great story! I love Merlin/Arthur parings!

They're just so much fun to work with!

Can't wait to read the sequel!

it was brilliant! i loved it! but i love all MerlinxArthur :D

You already know way i fink of this but its super! hehe