You wanted reviews. I want to write my own fanfiction, but I just started exploring fanfiction a year ago. This is exactly the type of writing that I want to write for other fandoms, and maybe this one. This is amazing! I really like how you humanized both of them during a flat out lemon story of 10 chapters lol. Most authors need 30 chapters to humanize characters that wouldn't be together without specific circumstances, and you did that within one chapter. I'm obsessed with this entire story. I love it so much. I haven't figured out how to write or post anything yet, but I would love your help if you had time.

Noooo...yyyyyy

dear God! what did i just read?, its pains me... i can't breathe! i'm definitely not in the verge of tears! definitely not!
put the smutt aside, and i know those were necessary for the plot, this is still a nice read tho... even if the word "nice" would describe the whole situation of this Story!.. dammit!..

and this somehow reminds me of a similar ending from another story and a quote that has the same meanings,.. damn, i hate you Author-san~..

u rlly did me like that
i’m sobbing

Omg, that ending, I'm so lost for words

I'm crying..the story really hurt me :"(

That kills me, but fantastic (seems like the wrong word, but "good" isn't good enough) ending.

I'm going to tell a huge lie right now, and say that I totally DIDN'T cry after reading the ending. I am perfectly fine and not at all upset that despite the depressing as hell ending, I can't bring myself to be mad at this story. Really tho, the writing was pretty good, and I get that just because a story has a sad ending doesn't mean that it's bad. Good job author :')

I'm just as heart broken! I loved the story so much!

loved this...
ending is just too sad,though!

the ending man... whyyyyyy?! urgh.; lkdfjwoeijo

I'm crying, you broke my heart

Though I hoped for a happy ending, sad endings are alright too. Unfortunately, in reality, sad endings tend to take over. Happy endings gives us a sense of hope, but that hope is usually false. It just makes everything more bleak.
Thank you for writing this story! I really enjoyed the smut scenes and how the heart breaking scenes made my heart feel something. I haven’t felt something this painful in a long time.

woah. i actually cried. not sure if it was because i was listening to mahler or not, but this was truly beautiful, but so sad at the end.

I haven't cried this much on a fanfiction since I read isolation which I read. 5 times God I love this I'm going to have to read this again.