Well it was a pretty sweet ride up until the Rin bit, and that awkward 9th chapter. But your writing style was good, so yeah!

Ugh why am I enjoying this so much? I disgust myself.

The end? Just like that?

To be truthful, I had like the beginning of the story when Sesshoumaru was showing his dominance over Inuyasha, but when Inuyasha ran away with Rin, it upsets me a little...I had thought that they would be together in the end...Anyway, a good enough fanfic that I would put as favorite and following. Good job!

These are my thoughts for all chapter.
sesshoumaru was a b*****d in this ..poor inu puppy.
how could he humiliate and rape inuyasha like that. i want kick his butt until he flying to north pole and let he eaten by polar bear..arghh.. (sorry i can't control my emotion*bow*)
sooo..this story just finish like that?i really hope sesshoumaru will realize his stupid attitude.
if you make a sequel for this story let me know it.
after all i really like your story.

One this was NOT a Romance story AT ALL
Two RAPE DID NOT LIKE THAT don't sit well with me. let people no rape is in the story at the title page.
three I did like ch 1. I am going look at some more of your story.

awwww que triste , ojala escribas la continuación de esta historia , me gusto , Ojala Sesshomaru aprenda una lección de no tratar mal a Inu Kun y que Rin descubra la verdad y ODIE a su señor (hay que mala soy jajaja) pero esperare con ansias que Inuyasha encuentre a alguien que lo ame y que se olvide de Kagome

THAKYOU SO MUCH FOR WRITTING THIS I WANT TO CRY

So I guess you aren't going to write a next story, and this is up for adoption(not that I want to adopt it-_- I'll have you know I'm a horrible one in terms of updating.)

Yes I think Inuyasha will enjoy some vodka. lol

I can't wait for the next chapter, and I could hardly wait for this one either!

I guess this leaves it with an open Epilogue. I have no clue what will happen next, but for some reason it seems like a fitting end would be if Inuyasha dies by Sesshoumaru's hands. haha I'm so evil.

Looking forward to seeing how you will wrap this story up. I just found it today and have to admit that it is a compelling read.

well it sounds like you got this planned. I pray for a happy ending lol

NOOO! INUYASHA! MAKE THE PAIN STOP! PLEASE! SESSHOMARU NEEDS TO SEE WHAT HE'S DOING IS WRONG! PLEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED MORE!