This was simply wonderful! I enjoyed it SOOOOOOOO much and had many 'LOL' moments and 'Aww' moments as well as 'OMG' ones too. i'm thrilled to have read it! Thank you for the pleasure! Keep Writing *GRINS*

two thumbs up!

:D you really got the talent!

I say this chapter was just WOW to say the Drusilla actully being right was a SHOCKER. I kinda feel sorry for ethel just a very tiny part of me is but that is really small. And how the way constance was dealing with it was Amazing to say at least.

Favorite parts

“Don’t suffocate the poor girl,” snapped Miss Hardbroom. Her voice seemed unchanged from the norm, as if she was completely unaffected by the night’s traumas.

“And you have lessons in a few short hours. I think that going back to bed would be profitable, especially since Maud now has to stay awake for the next six hours being regularly dosed with antidote.”

“If you could let Miss Cackle know the events of tonight’s little drama, it would be most appreciated,” Miss Hardbroom called after her colleague.

Love the story still.

I liked it when millie got the potion right. At least Constance used some good old reverse psychology.

Favorite parts and there is so many here that here are the ones that won top place for me.

A ream of choice profanity ran through Miss Hardbroom’s head but she kept control of her tongue. She turned back to Ethel, resisting the urge to shout and wake the entire school.

“There is a very good reason why the dangerous potions cabinet is so-called, Ethel, and also why it is off-limits to students. You are in an unspeakable amount of trouble. Miss Cackle’s office, first thing in the morning.” If I were you, I’d start packing now, she added mentally. “Mildred, lab, now!”

Miss Hardbroom could move quickly when she wanted too, reflected Mildred as she stood just inside the doorway of the potions laboratory, watching the teacher flying around the room gathering ingredients out of nooks and corners and throwing them seemingly haphazardly into the cauldron on the front desk.

“Because I too know from experience that being sick and having very long hair does not make for a pleasant combination.”

“ I’ve been brewing potions for almost twenty-five years and even I slip up occasionally.” To her astonishment, Miss Hardbroom merely put an arm around her in what could almost be called a hug.

Okay I always will like a story which starts in Constance's Potions lab. And how millie thinks that she needs to put somemore of this herb or that kind of weed. I thought the girls would have to take a look at their books or on the blackboard for the potion resipe.

And I never though Ethel would sink that low.

I like that Sybil tryed to tell Ethel off, wish she just told Constance about it sooner.

Favorite parts for this CHAPTER

“And Mildred and Maud’s perfectly timed explosion signals the end of the test.” Miss Hardbroom could be seen moving through the smoke, which dissipated with a wave of her hand. She had her usual expression of mercilessness affixed firmly in place. “Seeing as though no-one else’s potion produced quite such spectacular effects, I’m expecting something extra special from you two.” She peered into the cauldron and raised her eyebrows, which all the girls had long since come to know as a very bad sign.

“Normally I would, yes, but this is the dangerous potions cabinet we’re talking about here Ethel. Don’t you think that’s going a little bit too far? Hardbroom’s not stupid, if she thinks it’s dangerous then it probably is.”

" I said ORDERLY line to collect them.”

Miss Hardbroom sighed heavily and strode to the cupboard, magicking it shut once again.

“It’s called a draught, girls, and there are quite a few in this castle. Nothing remotely sinister or supernatural. Mind you,” she added under her breath. “I could’ve sworn I locked that cabinet five minutes ago.”

Okay this is getting intersting now. So mille has gotten the tran of though.

Fave parts

Hell hath no fury like a woman woken up at half past one in the morning by her least favourite student.

That had me laughing out loud. Falling off the chair too.

“Mildred Hubble, this had better be an extremely good emergency.”

Miss Hardbroom emerged, looking quietly furious that a second-year had had the temerity to break into her bedroom. It was almost the same expression of disdain that she had worn when Mildred had dropped the fire bucket over her head.

“Oh think Mildred, please!” pleaded Miss Hardbroom. “It could’ve been anything!”

“The dangerous potions cabinet was unlocked,” she murmured. “I knew I’d locked it at the end of the lesson. I knew it.”

A few moments of stunned silence followed until the potions teacher returned, looking grave.

well that was a good chapter. I liked the part where millie finds the teachers rooms.

*applards* well done! Sorry for not reviewing every chapter but I thoughly enjoyed it, espesily when HB used revese- pycolgoy on mildred :D well done my dear!

Oh poor maud! I hope HB can help

ooh great start! I'm on tenter hooks to what happens next :D

That was absolutely fantastic ii stayed up all night reading it and now its 4 in the mourning nice job you are brilliant i hope to see more!

yeah final chapter up :D

loves it x this was such a great story that came from such a simple phrase

wonder what Maud and HB talked about ? x would love to of been a fly on the wall at that conversation lol

xx

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story - beautifully written. Hope there's another fic soon :)

Gradgies on the ace fic !