Yep, still reading your stories. Read all 3 and enjoyed them very much. You are a great writer. For that I thank you.

Another wonderful story of yours. Thank you.

Have enjoyed this plus the rest of the series. Love the way you have written Tony/Ziva throughout. Thank you for this story.

I'm a little late to the party reviewing on this... I just found it yesterday, but I thought you should know that I loved it... as well as the two that come before it. Just a great characterization of the two

thanks for writing...loved it

very much like Ziva protrayed here, I think you have the essence of her

the earlier stories are gone from this site

I hope you are simply revising, not removing permenently, I am glad I got to read them before

Thank you for sharing

'Lifting his head up, Tony stares the older man dead in the eye, and can almost see his own image reflected back in the dark pupils.'

like this image

and Gibbs at the end, so in character

“ I know she’s lying,” he explains. “ I just don’t know what she’s lying about.”

most plausible

this story is an excellent blend of exploring character deveopment raised by canon ie the trust issues and your own mystery

intriguing dove tailing

'and he almost for a moment wishes he had paid more attention to all the medical texts he had flicked through last year.'

love the attention to detail

I realise I read the prequel to this, I hope I reviewed, if not apologies as that was an excellent read too

most interesting beginning

I honestly don't know what the world is coming to when a well-crafted, evocative, superbly written story like this gets 7 reviews and others that are the polar opposite of the above get 300. And I'm a little ashamed to say that this isn't the first time I've read this, but it is the first time I've reviewed.

Perfection from beginning to end - you have a real way with words and with creating characters/situations that are believable and well fleshed out. And whoa boy can you write Tiva like a mad... well, writing thing. (It's 3am and I'm not very coherant - apologies) Great handle on all of the NCIS crew and... well, I can't say enough about all the ways I love this story and the previous two.

Bravo.

This is one of the best stories out there! Your style and point of view are superb! I wish you wote more stories. I would love to read them.

I seriously don't understand why only 5 people reviewed this story.

It's one of my favourite. You wrote a really fantastic sequel.

The way you describe the characters and their actions is really great. Especially the way you portray their emotions and how they try to deal with the situations is really amazing.

They story has a really nice flow and is easy to read. The chapters are a little long but I don't mind that. In fact it makes you more attached to this story because you spend more time reading it and trying to understand their behaviour.

You really did a fantastic job. Sometimes I wish you would have written a little more Tony and Ziva moments but there are these small details that make you smile and you know that Tony and Ziva are trully happy.

I hope you will write some more because in my opinion you have a great talent to write Tony and Ziva.

Awesome fic. There were some distinct British-isms in it (time references, specifically), but in no way did that detract from the solidness of the prose. I also appreciated the subtle approach you took regarding TIVA in this story - they're clearly a committed couple, but have moved beyond the initial sex!sex!sex! mindset.

Honestly, this really should have more reviews than it does. It's better written than most of the fics around, and your grasp of style is superior to many others.

Well done.