Hey didn't feel like signing in.. Sooo where's this story you're talkin bout? Are you still writing it? I hope so! I never saw the original I feel like I missed out! :(

well i want u to update:)

O MY GOOOOOD Can't wait next!

please write more for this really good and u doing a good job. don't stop write keep write more.:):):)

write more cant wait for the next chapters. i think that johnny and jess should be together. write more cant wait for the next chapters.:):):)

Hey no fair! I was just getting into this. Lol. It's a good story so far, but I guess I can't blame you for having a life. It's pretty well written. Better than anything I could do as I don't have the patience. Although you do kinda inspire me. Who knows. Maybe one day I'll stop being to lazy and write my own Bully (which pwns, btw) fic. The only thing I can say is Jesse seems little Mary Sue-ish, besides her being adorably naive. Not really complaining, but I just wanna be honest. I hope you get your muse back 'cause I wanna read more. Good Luck.

-Shanée

this is up the good work. I think you should have johnny and jess more chapters.:):):)

this is really really great. whats going happend next. i think u should have jess and johnny together. :):):)

Of course, 'lil miss perfect' who is beautiful, sporty, smart, rich, gets along with everyone. Haven't seen that before.

Hey RA, Sorry I didn't update or anything but I've been spending alot of time at the doctors lately and didn't have time or an internet connection at my dissposal. Again, sorry. I really do want you to continue yur story and cmon smile dude. I know yur frustrated right now with your stories buck ya need ta look on the bright side of things from time to time. It really does help. O.~

Anywho I better wrap this up before I start rambling. (lol) Keep moving forward and rock on RA. Your Truly, The Mistress O.~

Omg, you havn't updated this in ages :) But anyway, I love it, i think its cool that everyone has figured(?) out that Johnny likes Jess :D

Also, I'm reviewing on chapter 1 since it won't let me on chapter 12 D:

Please update thou ;)

OMFG! I LOVE THIS STORY! its so...compelling. yeah! omg plz hurry and update! I give you lots of chocolate munkee chunk chip cookies if u do! Wuv ~Jello O.~

Luv this story,

I've read it about 4 times now plz write more!

Well gd,

PLZ WRITE MORE!

I respect your ideas, yet there are problems.

You already started the story with the game's scenes. It is too hard for the readers to understand your story at all because you changed the plot. There is also a problem that readers might think that the story will be confusing because Jesse was already mentioned as the main character of your story, not the mysterious girl you were talking about. Advancing this fanfic of yours into the last chapter or Summer Chapter will surely make no sense as well.

You have to tell what would happen next after Jimmy defeated Russell and befriends with him. You were already in Chapter 2 of the game right? The Preps' Chapter?

Also, about your cousin. If you were gong to put her to the story, just make sure she's only a minor character. That's good enough.

Your story was set during the game. You have to continue it because you started in that way.

I'm a fan of your story, that's why I wanted to read the story VERY clearly, to make sure I read it right, just like what I've seen in the game.