So yeah... Four years later, there's still somebody reading this :)

I found it intriguing. I'm a little sad that it's not finished, but sometimes, things just go this way. Would love to see it continued, though :)

Ha FINALLY I manage to reply to this story!:D

Oh my, dunno what to say about the start, it made me feel a bit uneasy..

It was Angell who falled on that truck loaded with mattresses right? that's just really good luck, a truck saved her life, man you had me beliving she died, now that was mean!:P

Oh the person that are somewhere dirty? and it's Lindsay, that's right she got kiddnaped, I hope she's okey.. (I'm sorry I'm a little slow minded today:P)

I like the consern Stella have for Mac, wanting him to get some sleep or rest for a bit:) and yes I belive Stella is Mac's guardian angel;)

I like the talk between Michelle and Hawkes:)

Not Adam to?:o I hope he's okey.. And I hate the cliffie here..:P

Im looking forward to reading what happends next!:)

My goodness, first I would like to just say that I'm SO EXCITED to see this update. I was just thinking about this story the other day, wondering when it was going to be updated. Its been one of my favorites since I first started reading Fanfiction. Plus, I know the characters more. Luckily, I was running through my fave stories to see who's updated and saw this one (: I hate that I didn't see it sooner.

Now on to the fun part: I love the chapter and ofc I'm still following this story. This was one of my first fave and thanks for an awesome chapter. I hope there's an update soon. I noticed the cliffy. And good luck with whatever's going on in your real life. Take care (:

I most definitely assure you it's NOT crap. Put the paranoia away-save it for the characters-cause this is just gettin' plain crazy. And what did you just do to ADAM? LOL, can't WAIT for more!

Thanks for the notes, that's very nice of you. I see we've been inspired by the same line from Shakespeare as well :P

Great chapter, I have to admit to being a bit confused by it first read, but i had a quick check back of the previous one and it made sense then. And I guess they mysterious feel to it is all part of the darkness surrounding the team. Sort of working backwards, but that is a bit of a cliff-hanger! So Adam is in peril now, crikey, is there going to be anyone left? XD Not that I'm going to complain about peril of course.

So, the mystery deepens with the image of the archangel and the mention of the game that Kendall notices. nice to have a mention of her, and one of my favourite British curses :D Fantastic descriptions as always, all ringed with murkiness and gloom. Loved this one in the alley as Adam and Stella walk into it, hopefully not towards their doom of course... 'They climb down into the darkness. Even with their flashlights they can’t quite drive the gloom away. Adam tries to shake off the feeling of climbing down into Hades.

Black, grey and green shimmers in the small circles of light as they slowly walk ahead. Shadows everywhere, and then the passageway branches. ' Very sinister and very fitting to the feel of the chapter, I get the feeling that things are getting darker hereon.

Right, all out of order, but back to the beginning. I'm releived that Angell has not fallen to her death, great to see her alive! And a nice way out with falling into a truck full of mattresses :D Wonderful descriptions at the beginning of Flack's horror and inability to move, and also how Mac is affected. Loved the opening lines and the two different voices, 'Somewhere in a corner of his vision Flack sees Mac hover, colorless. Motionless. Unable to move. A voice screaming in his head, do something! A desolate whisper, you should have done something.'

I'm feeling very sorry for Lindsay with wherever she is, doesn't sound good at all. I like how you wrote the senses she is able to use, and not use. Poor Danny too, he's really suffering at the moment. Interesting little scene with Hawkes, is Michelle a new friend of his? Apologies if I've missed her earlier. I'm wondering if she's going to appear again. I liked the line about the needing to talk.

So, great chapter, thanks for the update, and continue soon!

and i was nominated for best reviewer, so do me a kindness!

loved it, i was looking forward to reading more of this.

it would have to be a huge rat to knock out adam! reminds me of the monster from that horror flick Cloverfield. update soon!

It's nice to see this story back after a few months of dormancy. As alway, it was intense. I am very happy that you can go for a while with no dialouge and I'm still able to pay attention cause I usually can't do that.

Anyway, good job, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

-CI

So I have been reading this obviously but I just couldn't get myself to reply until now. I mean this is just an amazing story you know? It has everything! Poor Mac I mean wow, seeing something like that? And Lindsay gah! Okay I could go on and on but yeah I have to finish my own FF lol

Now, what did you do to my Adam? lol

Hey, OMG thank you so much for the dedication, i feel all special! I also loved this chapter very much. I know its not supposed to be humorous but Angell got saved by mattresses! Thats brilliant! I loved how you put Angell in the spotlight for a minute i loved it and i love the Mac/Stella interaction. Thank god (Endy) that Angell didn't die, it's raining Angel's :P I really can't wait to find out where Lindsay is or who took her so update when you can don't rush! This story is perfect and definitely does not need to be rushed :)

It's not crap! I really wish I could get the person who is spreading that around, all the authors here think that and it is not true! Everyone one in here is dead on in their concern about the case and wondering who took Lindsay. But I'm still hooked and wanting to see how this ends. Thank you for the look that Lindsay is alright. But the scene where Michelle is comforting Sheldon was fantastic. He needs to take care of himself too, if he is to help solve this case.

It is so cool that Kendall has made a connection to what Danny was drawing, so now they know they are following a viable lead. I'm so glad that Jess is alright after being pushed out that window. But it also makes me sad this is the only place she will live on. Crap! Now they have Adam, or someone does. Yes, you haven't had a cliffhanger in a while...still doesn't mean that they are good for my health. :D

This is really good! I hope you continue it soon!

Love always, Heavenly...

I've managed to miss a whole load of cliffhangers! How did I do that? Anyway, I'm very sorry for having missed them, and I'm really glad that I've now caught up with reading these chapters.

Love all the suspense that you're still weaving into this story, the link to Dante, and Mac's dream, and now there are both vampires and archangels - I love it!

I really liked Adam's meal, and how all the team were there to enjoy it, very sweet :) I also like the way that Danny and Lindsay have been slowly reconnecting through the last few chapters, sitting next to each other and making a couple of efforts to talk. But then you go and kidnap Lindsay! I did, however, love that Danny was leaving a message on her phone for her to pick up 'later'.

And now, what've you done to Angell? I'm sure your chapter title-ing was very deliberate ;) I thought that Mac was going to fall, and that his dream was a sort of forewarning, but so cruel to do that to her! I loved the description of her attack, 'She seems to be pirouetting with a man of whom Mac only sees dark clothes swirling', I have a very vivid picture of that, and maybe it links into the themes throughout the rest of the story, an angel fighting with an agent of darkness?

Anyway, I really loved this chapter, and the preceding ones. I do hope that you can update this soon, but totally understand if you're busy, I'm hardly one to talk! ;)

What an interesting way to write. It's almost as if I were watching the show, except I can "see" what the people are thinking.

It's not often that I read stories that center on multiple characters, but I can't put this one down.

Judith Alta K

OHmygod! Another favorite chapter! I live for characters in distress and Lindsays kidnapped and what has happened to Angell? It seems like Mac's dream has come true or what not. I can't wait to read the next chapter! So I hope you update soon. xD

Oh god :o, the ending half of the chapter, wow..

And there's another cliffhanger.

On to read the next chapter xD