Well, not much of a ending, but it works for what they been though. Did you make a sequel? What happened to Her stories after everyone ran away or died? You know, the lose ends?

No, not Fred! It makes sense, but still... How old was he any way? You know, outside of Her story.

Oh no. Don't be a zombie Fred! Feel the pain!

You goingto kill everyone that did in the book's, aren't you?

Stupid Fleur. Shoulda listened to the boss man.

What story was that? I think I'd like to read it. Talking raven sounds cool, yet creepy. Was it called "Nevermore"?

Oh, dear. They're going to be there forever.

Oh, what now! They got out!

Is everyone going to die? You know, the people J.K Rowling killed? I sure hope not, that 'd be evil.

This is interesting. All I can think to say right now.

You could make a book out this, an absolutely legit one. ;P This premise is so exciting! Despite the short length, I enjoyed reading Journey to Reality. :D

*sniff...sniff* That was...sad. beautiful. scary. justifying. inspiring. tear-inducing. awe-inspiring. courageous. heart-breaking. just...

Perfect.

I liked both of the references in this chapter, the Voldemort as Number Six, who is still not free to leave even after having given information to the warden of his prison (Reference to "The Prisoner," the old one not the new one) & the "Nevermore" raven.

Loved it! The idea was so original. It was bittersweet and just perfect! Keep writing!

This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read on fanfic. The cut between reality and 'fantasy' is completely fascinating, and you spin a tale around it with poignancy and strength. If there's one HP fanfic story I won't forget, it'll be this.