Reviews for Starting New: The New an The Old
writofwhatever chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
I like the story...can you please update soon and continue it?

) I hope you continue this story it's really great and the "NEW" May sound so AWESOME!
xFlipJamsx chapter 6 . 1/6/2011
please update the story. i really want to know what happens.
sapphiremayjeanyahoo.com chapter 2 . 9/5/2009
nice story

it's pretty good for a rookie. oh and hi! i'm sapphire. but call me may. it's my second name. my full name is sapphire may j. santos. any way, keep it up!
Dayna p chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
WHEN WE GONNA HAVE A SEX SCENE?
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 6 . 4/30/2009
I LIKED MAY WHEN SHE WAS NORMAL!CHANGE HER BACK I TELL YOU!OR ILL TURN INTO AN EVIL THING AND DO SOEMTHING I WOULDNT WANT TO DO!
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 5 . 4/30/2009
that was the whole cory 'you-are-the-damsel-indistress-and-drew-is-the-knight-in-shining-armour' thing
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 4 . 4/30/2009
i can bet you that its the girl that was with harley!
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 3 . 4/30/2009
ah!may has turned scary! why on earth did you do that to her? i liked her before, but this is really good as well so im not complaining!
Arysd chapter 6 . 4/20/2009
Ooh, I can't wait for some more May/Drew interaction. ;D

You made may a total kick-butt girl. She can totally pull off the 'I'm strong and confident, don't mess with me' thing. 8DD
DemoicWerewolf chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
I really wonder what is going to happen in the next chapter. I like the part where Kaien qustioned drew about may and where may was confronted by the twins! XD It was very cute and mays oufit sure sounds nice! Keep Updating I really can't wait for the next chapter and for the new people to come in!w
Damiana1994 chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
WHY CAN'T THEY ADMIT THERE MADLY IN LOVE WITH EACHOTHER! May and Drew should be randomly stranded together somewere just to get in a life or death accident so they can admit there love and get it on and going! sheesh the innocence of it all.
Gyaradosmaster chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
Outfit is okay.

Cool story.

Upload when you can.
1yesgurlheygurlyes1 chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
her outfit sounds really cool! please update soon! D
1yesgurlheygurlyes1 chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
woohoo! the sequel rocks! aw that is just so cute! thank you so much for writing the sequel! D
Yes.I.Ship chapter 3 . 4/8/2009
you may want to reread this before you post. some of the sentences are a bit awkward, and there a few serious grammatical errors that really take away from the writing.
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