| Reviews for Starting New: The New an The Old |
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writofwhatever chapter 6 . 5/14/2011 I like the story...can you please update soon and continue it? ) I hope you continue this story it's really great and the "NEW" May sound so AWESOME! |
xFlipJamsx chapter 6 . 1/6/2011 please update the story. i really want to know what happens. |
sapphiremayjeanyahoo.com chapter 2 . 9/5/2009 nice story it's pretty good for a rookie. oh and hi! i'm sapphire. but call me may. it's my second name. my full name is sapphire may j. santos. any way, keep it up! |
Dayna p chapter 1 . 8/5/2009 WHEN WE GONNA HAVE A SEX SCENE? |
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 6 . 4/30/2009 I LIKED MAY WHEN SHE WAS NORMAL!CHANGE HER BACK I TELL YOU!OR ILL TURN INTO AN EVIL THING AND DO SOEMTHING I WOULDNT WANT TO DO! |
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 5 . 4/30/2009 that was the whole cory 'you-are-the-damsel-indistress-and-drew-is-the-knight-in-shining-armour' thing |
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 4 . 4/30/2009 i can bet you that its the girl that was with harley! |
ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 3 . 4/30/2009 ah!may has turned scary! why on earth did you do that to her? i liked her before, but this is really good as well so im not complaining! |
Arysd chapter 6 . 4/20/2009 Ooh, I can't wait for some more May/Drew interaction. ;D You made may a total kick-butt girl. She can totally pull off the 'I'm strong and confident, don't mess with me' thing. 8DD |
DemoicWerewolf chapter 6 . 4/13/2009 I really wonder what is going to happen in the next chapter. I like the part where Kaien qustioned drew about may and where may was confronted by the twins! XD It was very cute and mays oufit sure sounds nice! Keep Updating I really can't wait for the next chapter and for the new people to come in!w |
Damiana1994 chapter 6 . 4/13/2009 WHY CAN'T THEY ADMIT THERE MADLY IN LOVE WITH EACHOTHER! May and Drew should be randomly stranded together somewere just to get in a life or death accident so they can admit there love and get it on and going! sheesh the innocence of it all. |
Gyaradosmaster chapter 6 . 4/13/2009 Outfit is okay. Cool story. Upload when you can. |
1yesgurlheygurlyes1 chapter 6 . 4/13/2009 her outfit sounds really cool! please update soon! D |
1yesgurlheygurlyes1 chapter 2 . 4/13/2009 woohoo! the sequel rocks! aw that is just so cute! thank you so much for writing the sequel! D |
Yes.I.Ship chapter 3 . 4/8/2009 you may want to reread this before you post. some of the sentences are a bit awkward, and there a few serious grammatical errors that really take away from the writing. |