Eggman seemingly kills Tails and all that happens to him is he gets sent to FAT CAMP?! ARE YOU F******* KIDDING ME?! I've had far worse happen to me over far less! Was that supposed to be FUNNY or SOME S*** LIKE THAT? BECAUSE IT F****** WASN'T! FAT CAMP, REALLY? THAT'S THE BEST YOU CAN DO?
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At first, I thought that the answer to this might be the rating, and if this fic had been rated K than I wouldn't have posted this review. But then, on a whim, I decided to look at the rating for this fic, and lo and behold its rated M. F****** M. IT YOU'RE GOING TO GIVE YOUR STORY AN M RATING, MAKE THE MOST OF THAT M RATING. WHICH MEANS KILLING THE B****** THAT KILLED TAILS, NOT SENDING HIM TO FAT CAMP!

Sorry for the editing mistakes,I'm typing on a Kindle

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Okay,you may have been a good writer,but that ending was only would Tails never give up his brotherly love for Sonic just to be something more to him,but he had no reason to become more anyway. Tails (If he wasn't so OOC with him wanting to become more) would've surely picked reuniting with fact,he would never choose to stage his death in the first place! He never in any game has been shown wanting to make Sonic dump Amy for good as a friend,nor has he ever shown his want to be truly you have to agree, that "Tails being a girl in SA2" crap was BS.

I would like you too rewrite the ending for this into something more apealling and not OOC.
Good day sir

All I'm gonna say is that Tails sounds like a girl because HE'S VOICED by a girl most of the time. I didn't fully read it yet, but if Kim from the ending is tails, it's 0/10. If not, then it's okay

Soo.. hey reading your fic and stuff and.. it's great! 10 out of 10 good job! :oh and.. yeah ok..' Papyrus says hi!

IGM, it would mean a lot to me if this story would go on a lot more, if u have spare time in your life anywhere...I would love to hear more from this story (tails and sonic are perfect for each other [tails the vixen I meant]), this story would would get the best ratings from me if I could do that, anyways keep up the awesome stories. -Lukemeister

welp then. I don't quite know what to think. Though honestly, I LOVED IT. the plot was even better than I would expect it to be for a TG story. although not the best. I give it an 8/10

noice cringe m9 10/10 would kill myself again

This was amazing, simply amazing. You should continue this in another story.

We need more Female Tails. :D
Plus for awesome story.
Plus, plus if you make another sequel. :3
Kudos, this is Brilliant!

And at that instant sonic tore a hole in space time he broke the seal letting loose an object that was never ment to be released into mortal hands. Where will this object pop up in the future only time will tell.

"His love for machines and fighting were replaced" And I stopped reading.
a gender change shouldn't change the personality of the subject, that and the fact that Tails without the love for machines simply ISN'T tails.
The fic had a huge amount of potential, and that sentence ruined it for me.

Try adding more lemon to it, while writing about their everyday life. Loved the story, just needs a bit more added to it.

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Hey, good story, and I can actually see this happening. (Should probably stop reading fanfics like these sense I plan on working with sonic team later on. 0_0) I would like to colab with you, as I think this could go MANY different ways. I appreciate you looking at this review, and hope that your willing to pm me. See ya, and peace out. *BOOP*