When’s your next Chapter? Can’t wait to read!

Hey! Just wanted to say that I love this story!
Also, I was also wondering if there would be a you-know-what scene with Bella and Edward, only because barely anything of the kind has happened yet.
Thanks so much for writing this!

Umm i would appreciate that . Hope you are alright and update soon

That's a pretty long tommorow... I doing you still have this, but awesome story.

How old Èdward)

OMG! I was laughing throughout Twilight too!

Oh... realized this wasn't complete.. Bummer.

Still gonna review tho..

As of now, I'd give it a 6/10, but it would have been a 8/10, but you kinda ruined some of Bella's character in chapters 21-23.

I thought it was complete, it's not... Though I highly doubt it was going anywhere GOOD, the author did say it would get sweet before it got sour.

So bet assumption would be that James would have made a reappearance and remembered Bella and caused a major problem in their relationship, which more then likely would have been a misunderstanding. Causing Edward to once again close himself off

And since this is Twilight fandom, Edward would still in the end up apologizing and begging her to forgive him.

Only two chapters left... So the last few chapters with the off feeling was just that? Killing bella's character slightly for some drama for the story near the end?

Man I was really enjoying this fic until these last few. But there are still some serious things unresolved... and we are supposed to be getting those resolved in two chapters?

Uh? Ok... Bella the last few has been... off..

Honestly how is Edward not jealous or questioning her right now? I hope things don't get sweeter too soon, she needs to be brought back down to earth, but I 100% bet next chapter everything will be back to normal.

Wtf was with that with mike? She says save her and then you have him[edward] leave and get drinks? That makes no sense...

Neither does mikes lines... Is he her brother or something? lol

To cure lonely nights? Hope that doesn't mean what I think it does... I don't this bella for the type.

I was fairly enjoying things up until that line.

That last joke made me snort pretty loud... Snort as in laugh, not the other kind..

I usually don't laugh from the jokes Female writers put in, good job with that.

nice story...
plz update soon...

Ive just spent 3 hours of my life on an unfinished fic? urrrggh. It was really good but the incompleteness of it has just ruined everything.