Update

So Rin and Takuma is now dating? Whoah they look so adorable!
Keep up the good work!
I'll be waiting what is Kikuri's plan and I hope that Takuma and Rin can overcome this.
Also, Illya is adorable, does she have a crush on Shiro in this story?

please do more, I hope the admirer gets sent to hell

i wanted to kill you! (peace!) i hate you for doing this to Takuma! this chapter is touchy if you write this in Takuma's POV.. i mean if that happen we readers can feel the every inch of Takuma's feelings.. his real feelings.. how he is confused..how bad it hurt him when he saw the straw dolls..when he saw kikuri and when he can imagine that rin and the others will be sent to hell... you should have expand the character's feelings.. the contain of this chapter is awesome but if you put it in much details will make this perfect and i mean (except if you reach my expectation) thats all what i can say.. and sorry late review. you know school is in the way

Feel kinda sorry for Takuma, he's just suffered more trouble after another.

Update soon.

Sorry for the late review, got caught up with work.

Anyway, going smooth so far. Kikuri just had to go and ruin Takuma's life again.

Update soon.

*dumbfounded* what?... What?... The hell?! I want to ruin the face of shinji and that dumbass admirer! I wanna go smack the face of shinji on the wall and rub it there until he die! .
takuma, doesnt need to be tormented again! Let me appear! Let me appear in the story! I guess me, appearing in the story is only possible in my dreams. *scratches head*
kikuri just put on the v sign? Is she insane?.. And why cant the three assistant cant turn on against kikuri?
Takuma... Takuma... Argh! Make a scene, where he isolate his self towards everyone. I mean, like he locked himself in his room, or he ran away then go back to his house in lovely hills, and reminisces the past when his mother, and seri is alive.. And i also want him to think many negative/sad thoughts that will make the viewers cry. I mean, a whole chapter full of dramatic stuffs. About the way he thinks.. And this chapter is kinda fast but i pay no mind when it comes to date stuffs

Argh..the man will pull the string because of jealousy to takuma, since rin is giving him a tour. Geez... Jealousy for the boy that your crush is close. Actually im already nervous reading the review. And i need to say this 'dont ever put the preview panel because it make me go insane and lost my patience waiting for you to update.' i will really love to mock you to update sooner. Haha! Im just kidding about mocking you :3
by the way. Can you please read my story and tell me how is it? Cant you? *puppy eyes*

Worth the time for the long wait. The plot seems to be connecting well. Glad to see some of the Fate/Stay Night characters have some spotlight.

I feel sorry for Takuma since he has to go through a lot of trouble again.

Keep it up!

Wha... Wha... What? Please dont make Takuma go to hell, he doesnt deserve that... Urghh! Thinking that he will be sent to hell makes me go crazy and kick someone's ass!... Please dont make Takuma go to hell... Please... Please... Update also... Your story is awesome specially its about Takuma, and i really like takuma's character because we are somehow alike...please continue! and again please dont make him sent to hell, or something will happen...

This is a really good plot keep it going, I'll be waiting for new chapters and I really like the cross over of fate stay night and jigoku shoujo

I thought you would never update this fic.

Anyway, things go smoothly and connects well with the previous chapters.

Keep it up!

Great chapter! It's good to see you updating this story once more. Good job, nice romance though it's short. Keep it up!

Yo, that was a great story! Sorry I couldn't review earlier, school is such a hassle.

Continue please, can't wait! _

Awesome story! Rin Tohsaka rules! I hope you will update this story, I would like to see what happens with Rin and Takumi