I suppose if you suspend all rational thought, these 2 will have a happily ever after. Except they’ll end up divorced for adultery within a few years. They are too sexually motivated.

Just so you know, Stanford does not offer a Bachelor’s degree in business.

horribly written story

Very well written and unique story!

I fear that there is something that there is something deeper to edwards disinterest in getting attatched to anyone. We already know he's adopted... I just fear that when he finds out he'll feel entirely alone and completely betrayed by his family... And then of course there is bella. Not looking forward to that part of the story

Me fascinó

T Epilogue and great story

Ooooooooh. I just loved this story.

Love this.

So sad.

Reading tbis again.:)

I already love this so much. All of the main characters are likable and I cant wait to see where this goes. Reminds me of a movie I watched a few years back called A La Mala, but your characters have more personality.

Diablos!

Great story !

I really enjoyed this and couldn’t put it down initially, however the last quarter of the story felt a little rushed which was a shame. I found Bella’s list of talents impossible to accept, she was 28 and had the amount of qualifications that take about 15 years to get, as well as managing about 12 jobs and an alter ego, AND being a talented painter, fighter and singer... nope... sorry. I just had to ignore those so I was able to keep reading the story. I love a strong Bella character, but your Bella was a little all over the place, I couldn’t really see how she could be one person...
You’re a fantastic writer, I just think the the plot could have done with a bit more mapping to make sure everything was relevant, fit in with the timescale and was tied up appropriately.