one my fav stories, so romantic

I loved it. It was so cute. Plus, the parts of the song just flowed perfectly with the story plot. great story writing.

:S:S:S:S:S:S:S

Shay

AWW! That was so cute!

now what I want you to do is write a songffic just like that, but use White Horse!

you know, when i first started reading this, it seemed like just a restating of the original story... but i read the reviews saying how good it was so i suffered through it... at least the beginning. during the biology talk i saw that it was very different. the story was great! (i'm tempted to put "grEAT! -ignore the horrible reference. lol :P)

Aww.

aw! this story was absolutely cute! i love how u put the words of the song into the story, like incorporrated into what they were saying! that was totally amazng! and i LOVE this song! i was playing it on repeat as i read the story!

luve,

Fairy!

EM EM EM M!

omfgomfgomfgomfgomfg

ARENT YOU THE GREATEST!

this is the most awesome oneshot ever.

gosh - i love it

SO MUCH - and I'm sorry it had taken me so long to review

but I do review now, aren't I?

ek - i just love love love the quote

"how long have you been seventeen"

the way he said it in the trailer turns me on

rofl. I LOVE YOU

YOU'RE SO AWESOME.

ily - ever, ever, ever.

x

Aw! That was so cute! I took that song as an inspiration for a story too!

Great story! That song is my favorite too! I really really really loved your songfic!

Aw...It's awesome. And the song is amazing too. It's one of my favourite songs right now. :D

It's so cute. and really good!

Josie xx

Ok, this is the first Twilight fanfiction that I've read that isn't a parody, so first and formost...

I LOVED IT! It showed Bella and Edward's love in a new way. And I adore the song too _

But I have to be a critizing reviewer as well, so...

1) just add one ? or ! at the end of the sentence. it looks mroe professional

2)Some of the sentences are kind of choppy, so make them longer or combine them so the story flows better

and 3) DETAILS! You need to add more detail! Just unleash everyting you got in every part. If that makes any sense. :D

and it did not suck. I can't write Twilight at all, and this is very good.

xo- Lauren

Oh emily! ek!

lol i loved it so so SO much. XD

it was really cute, and like i already told you; i totally love that song too. haha it's perfect for them.

great job, love. :)

ttyl

The is a beautifly written story. You did a great job on it. Can't wait to see the next one!

Extremley cute, adorable and amazing!