Hana as his daughter just seems absolutely brilliant. And fitting. Almost suspiciously so...

This is like my sixth time reading it yet it keeps getting me everytime.

Oh, my god, this story is beautiful and made me hurt in all the best ways. You're a fantastically talented writer and I love, love, love the characterization for Minato. He feels like such an organic and deeply flawed person, you did an incredible job! I'm so happy a friend of mine recommended this to me. Thank you so much!

This is amazing. I like that there was so much there that people wouldn't even imagine about the Fourth. This was really really good.

Jesus Christ, the last line destroyed me.

i'm just gonna lie down and rethink everything right now.
like jfc that was really dark for it being from Minato's pov. and i kind of love it. a lot.

That last line's referring to his father, and tying back into 'for a secret never to be told' thing, right? It makes sense, with the 'questions answered' part coming, though Kakashi does feature a ton...

I usually really, really don't like Minato because of how perfect he is made to be but I think you just cured me of my hate for him. He just seems so much more human all of a sudden. From now on, when he'll appear in other fics and I'll find myself raging at the hero-worshipping ensuing, I'll just tell myself that yours is the true Minato anyway, let people have their delusions. It's going to be great. I'm glad I gave this story a try.

Very interesting story. Loved the characterization and the style. Great job!

Riddle

What.. The fuck did I just read? Was this even Minato? Have you even read Naruto, do you even understand the characters? Surely you were writing this while under the influence of some type of narcotic, because.. This was horribly offensive to Minato, Kushina, his life in general. He is not a pedophile, he is a respectful person, he loved his wife, and his son. It's a shame people choose to butcher the best characters... -sigh.-

Your writing style is uniquely your own, and it's facinating to read. You give just enough away to keep us in, and leave just enough out to let us wonder. Absolutely love it :)

Oh gods, my fucking heart. ;o; THIS IS THE WORST BEST STORY.

You make my heart guts hurt. This is wonderful. There's so much lovely contrast between what is sad and what is not quite sad. But nothing is ever exactly happy except once for six: gold and that seriously messed with me because oh my goshness, those two. I'm going to guess that seven: - is about the question built from the beginning, if Minato's actually knew whether he loved Kakashi? and the answer was yes? Seven does a seriously amazing job of building up Minato's character and getting into his habits, his history, and his personality (and he went a little mad, yes?). Seriously great.

Oh my God. Just. Fuck. Thank you.

So sad :(

Love thething with him getting married and having that family.

Awesome lol