Lots of funky errors throughout the story, but it was easy to mentally auto correct it all as I read. Very fun. I’ll have to see what else you may have written in the years after this finished.

This was such a great read! I loved that it wasn’t predictable, and it really paralleled Garfield and Raven’s individual addictions. Thanks for sharing!

I think this is my second time reading this story and I love it just as much, possibly more! Good job with writing it.

It's nine vehicles. Not ten

OK, this chapter legit made me cry, very well written.

This is Fantastic. Love it. Great job

Dawwwh. This story was beautiful and brilliant. :)
I loved how you wrote their relationship. Thank you for this amazing story! x

Omg ok so I finished the story. But this chapter is what every single romance story needs. This is a type of chapter that would make me cry.
Gahhhh ily. I ship them so hard .

THIS WAS AMAZING, By the way, can you make a robin x starfire fanfic plz ._.

I love this story & think you're an amazing author (although I have a few issues with various parts of the story [Raven]). Keep up the good work. Seriously, the part where she blames him for went down between them when in my opinion it was her fault... I'm sitting here getting started all over again. Forgive me. The point is that now that I logged in, I can favorite this (& review). So I am. I'm going to stop talking. Again, good story.

Also the correct phrase is "pray tell" not pre-tell. Good story though

Gaudy. Not gouty.

Oh my god! I've been looking for this story everywhere. This is one of my favorite stories in the tt category. I'm so happy I found it. You balance sex with plot so nicely. I read this story when u first wrote it but never saved it. The second I found it I just had to reread it, something I never do. So thanks for you beautiful storytelling abilities and this little tale.
DxS4ever

A really good story.

Okay, I need to get this out of the way:
The past tense of "lie" in the sense of being prone somewhere is "lay".
- He lies on the ground now.
- He lay on the ground yesterday.
The past tense of "lie" in the sense of telling an untruth is "lied".
That's the only Recurring Theme mistake that I found irritating. There were several others, but they were easily glossed over.

Your plot carried along in a lively and diverting manner, for which I thank you. There were no slow spots.
Your dialogue works. It may not be Terry Pratchett, but it's certainly good enough.
Your exploration into the psyches of Raven and Gar was a sheer delight. And I'm a total sucker for happy endings.

Kudos on an all-around great tale.

Well it's about damned time.