| Reviews for Breaking Dawn: The Missing Chapter |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 3/29 Perfectly written loved it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2018 . ! You are such a talented writer. I've been trying to write a similar scene in my novel but I always stumbled over the wordage. You helped me realize I can explain it gracefully and classily without making it too porn-ish. Thanks |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2016 I like the one about the missing little girl how her mom went looking for her kid. In France and was looking for her kid. That may feature one movie I would like to see it again |
| seorhioj chapter 1 . 1/9/2013 dawgdfhiiofjgihdfgnklsfjohog lbvuif jbkbjbvkigjvg;lghkhj |
 ninny 1 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 very very nice thankyou |
| Ally chapter 1 . 12/5/2011 Ive read sooo many of these breaking dawn love scenes and I have to say yours is the best I have read by far! I want more! continue the story! |
| sweetmama77 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 Aw, beautiful! Bring on BD! |
| elina1 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011 This is amazing! Quite real first time besides the double orgasm part! I enjoyed it very much! |
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 That was spectacular! Thank you for that . . . Wonderful! |
| sigulya chapter 1 . 6/15/2011 THANK YOU FOR FINDING THIS CHAPTER. :) lol! LOVE IT |
| Kealoha chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 I absolutely believe this is the best rendition of the Edward Bella sex scene. :) leaves a lot to the imagination. I Love it! |
| deblovestwilight72 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 A great start the the book breaking dawn - I just loved it there wasn't that much smut compared to others, it was quiet enjoyable - would you think of doing more chapters on the ending of breaking dawn? Including all our faviourate characters. Thanks for sharing a great beginning to a great book. |
| meritposita chapter 1 . 1/12/2011 Wow i really love it and there wasnt a single penis cock or erection mentioned here woman this was hot and classy really like a missing chapter from the book! Thank you for sharing this! |
| it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 Really like your version of this night on Isle Esme! Beautifully written. |
| twihard12341885 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 ARGHH! I've read this several times now. I may of..kinda...printed it out and put it in my copy of breaking dawn to read whenever i get to isle esme. :P This love-making is beautiful. I tried doing this, the love-making side of it, rather than the just plain sex. I fail at it. This story is plain written talent. Bravo. |
