| Reviews for Electrical Storm |
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  heartrevolution chapter 1 . 9/27/2009 HOT! And very very nice too! Thanks for sharing :) |
 brainfear chapter 1 . 1/28/2009 So hot! |
| CommanderKilljoy chapter 1 . 12/28/2008 Wow. Just Wow. This story is amazing and so well written! Get job! |
| CSIdestiny chapter 1 . 12/13/2008 This is really good! :) I loved it. |
| MusicInMyHeart chapter 1 . 11/1/2008 Okay - that was HOT. Bring on the E/C action. Fantastic job! |
| IwishIwere chapter 1 . 10/23/2008 Wow! This is amazing, very descriptive and totally believable-if only TPTB would add a similar scene to heat up our Monday nights. Gotta love Eric and Calleigh passion. |
| BrokePerception chapter 1 . 10/22/2008 1 word: HOT! |
| TrishOrton chapter 1 . 10/21/2008 what can I say when your good your good lol |
| caligurl93 chapter 1 . 10/20/2008 that was really good update more soon |
| Lemon Green chapter 1 . 10/19/2008 Okay...so you used ONE of the forbidden words. Definitely wasn't as bad as what I was thinking you used. Oh, and just for the record, I think you did well. It's hard to consider it PWP when it ends with "I love you," you know? |
| somethingsdont chapter 1 . 10/19/2008 This was way too hot for its own good. Who needs substantial plot when there's insanely hot smut to be read? Not me. Impulsive sex is the best kind! I love that the thunderstorm was constantly in the background, and I can totally see the storm turning them on like that. Not that they need the extra help, but you know. ;) I always love the way you write Calleigh's reactions to Eric, and this was no exception. Also, I officially love Russian. Bottom line, it was HOT, and I want more. So... when's your next smut fic? :D |
| Audrey2419 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008 Whew! I have no words to describe. Please don't worry about the lack of plot, I didn't notice. This was so freaking hot that I'm gonna need a cold shower to recover... |
| christiangirliemiranda chapter 1 . 10/18/2008 Wow! That's really all I can say! Amazing story and Eric and Calleigh are so good together! Great job! |
| Marija Magdalena chapter 1 . 10/18/2008 If you're gonna write fics, substantial plot is not something we need. This was very, very, very hot. I have no words to describe my thoughts on this story. Great work, really! |
| CarolinaDawn chapter 1 . 10/18/2008 God. Now I have this new appreciation for thunderstorms! And I don't think I'll be able to go through any thunderstorm from now on without daydreaming this story in my mind. Or uh... trying to recreate it... hee. Seriously, this was HOT. Beyond HOT. I could put my favorite parts here, but then I'd have to cut and past the entire story, and that'd be one hell of a long review. You should write PWP more often! |
