Seriously ?

please finish it !

there is only one word that comes to my mind to describe this... BRILLIANT!

Just read all the chapters, I love this story! I love how you incorporate the other gym leaders and make a new story for the Lavaridge gym family. And the chemistry between Winona and Wallace is cute... Please update soon!

:) Oh, I get it, why the grandfather didn't want to be pitied. I agree with him. Flannery is a crazy little kid playing an imaginary game, and Wallace is the pawn. XD This is a very interesting story. Keep it up, so please update soon!

Just Started Reading But It's Brilliant. Can't Wait For The Next One.

Flannery's such a child, well technically she really is.

Sorry, nameless elder...)

-Well parents were not really much of a priority in teh games; . And to answer your quetion, yes this fic is pretty good.

-Ju-Fate/ JFate.

Bad Flannery! Impersonating a Gym Leader -gasp!-

Winona is quite the fierce battler, that's all I can say right now. Excited for the next chapter, especially when it comes to learning about Flannery's parents.

Wallace, for his part, at least managed to act surprised, despite the fact that he’d been hoping for just this sort of encounter with the lovely lady in front of him.

-You sneaky XP...

Winona glared, one arm akimbo, the other clenched in a tight fist. “Excuse me, but it’s awfully presumptuous to assume I can’t make my own decisions.”

-She sounds like she's gonna give him a real painful one; .

Haha, I love how Wallace is still trying to run after her! Can't wait for the next chapter 3.

Ooh, cliffy.

This chapter almost made me squeal like a fangirl. Quite rare, so good job.

Enter (mini) Flannery!

So Wallace is...stalking Winona? o_O haha. I know Wallace is far too princely to stalk. Anyway, I'm excited for the battle between the "Gym Leader" and our two stars.

Wallace gawked at her flustered outburst, astounded at what she thought. “No, no, no! You’ve got it all wrong, I swear! I’m not trying to seduce you, perish the thought! If anything, I was trying to court you.”

-Omaygwarsh LOL XP!

Haha, Wallace is so durn honest yet a bit too forward than how Winona would want. I love the part where they just laugh like crazy and the notion that Winona hasn't laugh like that for a long time.

I loved it. And I do believe that you are keeping them in character well enough.

I love that Wallace, "I'm not trying to seduce you, I'm trying to court you!"

Haha, this is one of my favorite chapters too.

Good so far. I love how everyone is portrayed so well. This is one of my favorite pairings in the whole of Fandoms, so it's nice to find a bit of an explanation about it.

Everyone is in character, but if you need too, don't be afraid to let them have a breach of it. Everyone has a set personality, and we all have those days when our normal demeinor just won't suit, it's just part of life. Anyhow, keep up the good work.

Lovely. So far, this is my favorite chapter as well.