The whole marriage law cliché is unrealistic just in theory...but Hermione of all people being the one to push for something like this is blatant OOC. Rather well written I will admit, but the premise just isn't believable.

That's how it is at small private schools too. Family, but not necessarily friends.

Awe, that's the end of the story? :( You know, you could neatly wrap this story up with just one more chapter. Have Hermione's law get blow to smithereens, and have Ron/Pansy and Ginny/Draco live happily ever after. I don't know if you still get on , but I'd love the see the end of this. I am following this story, so if you do, I'm sure I'll be the first to read!

Ha, family fun! So cute. It's interesting to see Molly's reactions.

Aw, poor Ginny! I just want to give her a hug. I personally was very struck by Harry's lack of interest of Ginny in the books. Yeah, he thinks she's hot, but he doesn't think of her once while out hunting Horcruxes. If he really loved her, Harry would have been continually worried about her welfare. I think Harry liked her, but that crush fizzled when she wasn't in sight. While I think Harry was a good guy, I also think that Ginny deserved better.

Hmm... Pansy digs a quidditch guy. I like it. :)

Hmmm... shall we watch this couple fall effortlessly in love, or will there be hurdles? I guess I'll soon find out.

Hmm... interesting. Ron is so cute and clueless in this story. I love it!

Hmm... how slytherin of Ginny. I really like this story so far.

Ha! I loved Ron's reaction to his sister's shopping. Spot on!

Hmm.. interesting. It seems strange that the golden trio would split this way, but then it happens all of the time in real life. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

You are really good at character development. I could totally see Ron acting this way.

Ha, this is a fun twist. I like seeing this side of Ron and Pansy. It's fun.

I have to say that I am really surprised that this fanfic has so few reviews. It's written really well... I guess the only thing I can think of would be the pairing... but, then I think it's a fun pairing. Maybe Hermione choosing what could be seen as a form of slavery? Perhaps, but I totally follow your logic. It makes perfect sense to me that Hermione would do something as ridiculous as this. I intend to review every chapter, so I can help you out with the reviews. You really deserve more of them.

Gotta say that was a funny way to start a "marriage contract" fan fic. You basically had Hermione and Harry throw everyone into the lion's den. Very funny twist on an overused cliché in HP fan fiction.

I enjoyed your portrayal of Ron Weasley here. Tired of all the Ron bashing in general, so this is a breath of fresh air. I hope you give him and Pansy a fair shake in this story.