A rip-roaring good read!

What a great story! I had found this awhile ago, but never finished it. I just found it again and very much enjoyed it. It was different and a cool adventure. I liked that you used Belos as the bad guy. I always thought that could have been an interesting path to go down. Anyway, I really enjoyed this! Thanks.

Presents of gold make wonderful gifts, just not sure this is the right kind. Great chapter - C

Perhaps you should allow anonymous reviews to your story?

Anyway, I'm really interested in what that sarcophagus is doing? Can't be Hathor. Update soon!

Woot! Loved it! - C

Oy! You had me really worried there for a while. Great chapter. Action packed and an emotional roller coaster.

That's what I'm talking about! Goa'uld butt kicking!

Oh, poor Daniels.

Kind of reminds me of the dual of the fates. I'm really interested still and I'm wanting to see how everything is going to play out. Update soon!

Nice, we're back on the planet again. Go Daniel! Kick some Goa'uld-ish butt!

Go, Daniel!

What a complicated chapter! So much going on in both...err phases? is that the right word? Nothing like being spread across conscious levels and locations! - C

Finally! Yeay, about time, too.

Go George... and Janet... and Sam! Go team! Great chapter - C

I'd appreciate it if he stopped MacKenzie as well. A brilliant, emotionally charged chapter - C

Gee, Dr. MacIdiot is starting to get really annoying. I hope T is going to get a chance to at least knock him out for a while!