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Dangrgangr9 chapter 26 . 9/10 Why would the hell would you want people to p.m. to push you to stroke your narcissistic ego to write a story you can write a story because you can not because a bunch of people tell you how much they really need you can a f****** |
Sky chapter 26 . 4/3/2018 This was amazing are you gonna continue this... |
asphodel95 chapter 26 . 8/16/2017 I love this story so much! You probably abandoned it, but I still hope you will update one day |
Guest chapter 26 . 8/27/2015 YOU NEED TO UPDATE PLEASE |
Maha chapter 22 . 1/15/2015 This story is amazing! I love it! |
bruna.osl chapter 26 . 8/12/2014 Can't believe you're not writing this anymore. Please, I know it's been a long time, but could you update? ): |
Kyoy chapter 26 . 8/11/2014 This is such a great story, I don't know how I've never come across this before! I'm just really disappointed to see that the last update was in 2010. Would it be too much to hope that you haven't abandoned this story? Please say you'll finish it, it's just too good to leave it hanging ;A; I really love how their relationship progressed from the beginning until this point. And I'm especially fond of Sirius' view of their relationship as well. I was very happy when he said he only yelled at Lily at the Hospital Wing was so he would get through to her. I really liked how Sirius was also perceptive to the truth behind their relationship, how he knew James would talk to his friends about it but since he didn't want to lie, he avoided talking about it altogether. I expect Sirius would figure out that Evan is Lily in the long run too. And ah, I'm definitely voting you push for an M rating as well. I really hope you continue this, I wanna read how Anna would warm up to Lily (how could she not?), how things go with the dueling, and of course, the progression of James and Lily's relationship. Please, please, please, please don't leave this story and finish it eventually! |
catallena7 chapter 26 . 8/4/2014 Is it wishful thinking to hope for an update? Lol |
anon chapter 26 . 5/21/2014 Finish this please! |
Jily chapter 26 . 2/1/2014 Please continue this story. Please. I just read it and I am in love. It's brilliant. Please? |
kkroonie chapter 26 . 4/22/2013 I just read this entire story and loved it! Are you going to continue? I can see it has been a while since you updated. This is my favorite Lily and James story, and I do hope you consider continuing. I love how you developed the characters. I'm assuming this story is not complete as there are so many plot lines that need to be resolved...like yhe conflict between Lily and her father and how he reacts to the dueling tournament, the Potters (especially Anna) and their feelings regarding Lily after really getting to know her, all the Marauders finding out about the nature of Lily and James' relationship and how it actually began, and much much more. Please please PLEASE tell me you haven't completely abandoned this fix. I need more! |
CHM13 chapter 26 . 4/4/2013 Just read the entire thing, are you still writing it? Or have you discontinued... |
birdsflyaway chapter 26 . 1/6/2013 I still adore this fic! I know it's been a while since you've updated. Not quite sure if you're even going to continue but I hope you might reconsider. This is really brillant :) |
Albuslover8101 chapter 24 . 11/23/2012 Oh god, please u |
Guest chapter 26 . 8/18/2012 i absolutely loved this chapter! It was amazing! I was waitin for something like this to happen! Lily and james make such a nyc couple and the make out scenes are hot! Plz post another chapter asap! |